Lovers Dance

Pure, soft, velvet skin Foaming crest of ecstacy Dance upon my shore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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November 16, 2012 at 3:18 AM
A titillating, palpitating love medley! Loved the passion exuding from your frothy lines! I was thinking of a kindred poem. I like 'Undulating waves' in the first line, while keeping your last, two lines. Your poem has spawned new ideas. That is the hallmark of a good poem! Enjoyed your romanticscape!
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November 16, 2012 at 11:24 AM
Thank you so much Stephen for stopping by. Rollo
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