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Lovers Dance

Pure, soft, velvet skin Foaming crest of ecstacy Dance upon my shore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/16/2012 3:18:00 AM
A titillating, palpitating love medley! Loved the passion exuding from your frothy lines! I was thinking of a kindred poem. I like 'Undulating waves' in the first line, while keeping your last, two lines. Your poem has spawned new ideas. That is the hallmark of a good poem! Enjoyed your romanticscape!
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Rollo West
Date: 11/16/2012 11:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Stephen for stopping by. Rollo

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