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Not a secret to unravel but a feeling to experience; "Pointe D'amour", I stand alone here, a mesmerised being. The white warm sand sinks discreetly under my naked toes As the fine grains ooze in between, awakening my senses. My hungry eyes take its first sips of merging of colours; Green hues with the white expanse extending afar and Inclining towards the crystal clear blue stretched lagoon, All held under the indulgent gaze of the lapis lazuli sky. My soul glows in immense sense of well being in tranquility That reigns, while in contrast my sleeping emotions are Dragged out of slumber uncoiling lazily to a crescendo, To match the violently lashing waves crashing incessantly Against the giant reef in calm water: held vigil since eternity. Birds' aubade mock my intrusion in this nature's secluded corner, Only meant for lovers, to explore each other in secret, Enjoying the ecstasy of climax in such enchanted panorama. 13/08/16 Contest: Wordscape by John Hamilton Judged 17/08/16 - Placed 4

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Date: 8/18/2016 7:25:00 AM
A lovely write Sunita. I've known places like this and sometimes miss them very much.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/18/2016 9:54:00 AM
May be they are made to make life beautiful...Thanks for reading and the nice comment. Regds Sunita
Date: 8/17/2016 11:01:00 PM
Thanks John for appreciating and the 4th place. I enjoyed so many wonderful poems through your contest. Congrats!
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Date: 8/14/2016 10:39:00 AM
a beautiful nature scene painted here. Wow.
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Date: 8/14/2016 11:10:00 AM
Thanks for the nice comment. This place is in the west of our island and called Pte D'amour, in a remote part. Not been there since some times and I don't know what climate changes has done to it...But we have such lovely places in many places of the island. :D Sunita
Date: 8/14/2016 9:09:00 AM
Tremendous imagery, this is one corner I wouldn't mind being backed into.
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Date: 8/14/2016 11:10:00 AM
:D Thanks for the nice comment. There are many such lovely places on my island to explore...:) Sunita
Date: 8/13/2016 8:20:00 AM
I particularly like the the part where you're talking about dragging out your sleeping emotions. I also love all of the colors. Very vivid! Enjoyed this read, Sunita.
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Date: 8/13/2016 10:02:00 AM
Thanks for reading. I'm happy you enjoyed the line and the words. :) Sunita
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/13/2016 10:01:00 AM
Hi, thanks for the read and the nice comment. Glad you enjoyed it. :) Sunita
Date: 8/13/2016 5:13:00 AM
Beautiful wordscape ... perceivable with delight ... GL
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Date: 1/22/2017 11:02:00 AM
Hi thanks for the read and appreciation. :)

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