Lovers Are Immortal

Two hearts owned
Two people of same interest in a canoe
Two people, four hands to row
Lovers are immortal
For their existence never shatter
To one, for the other to live, is what matters
Love is immortal
Living through ages and offsprings forever
A bliss in eternal
Like a rune on the sky and on oceans like henna
Lovers live through each other 
Lovers live for each other
Lovers live in each other
If one dies then the other has the memories and name of the gone
Its a result of what their togetherness has born
And if both dies, their love still stays
Stays on earth and continue its crave
For love never had a grave
Never can be buried 'cause it never dies
Its like a carving on a rock, which forever in history's been dried
A name which forever will be high
Lovers never die, lovers never die
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 2/3/2016 7:26:00 PM
Hi White Sage, Lovers are immortal for Love itself is immortal, it is eternal. Your words flow in this excellent write my friend. Your canvas is painted in Love's colours so bright. Your words sing White Sage, they paint your image so well. May your pen ever run gold. This is a seven and a fave....Vladislav.
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White Sage
Date: 2/4/2016 1:07:00 PM
hi vladislav, love indeed is such great immortal which God had bestowed on this world, i appreciate your comment
Date: 1/1/2016 12:35:00 PM
pressing the grapes of life love for sure is immortal excellent pen
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Date: 1/1/2016 3:41:00 PM
thanks Liam
Date: 12/31/2015 5:07:00 AM
True, although lovers may die, their love immortal remains! A seven. Very good my new friend and welcome to our poetic family. May you be happy among us. Happy New Year!
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White Sage
Date: 12/31/2015 5:35:00 AM
Thanks demetrios...best of my wishes to you too
Date: 12/30/2015 6:07:00 PM
This is a master piece my dear , such an spectacular and mesmerizing poem , u describe love in a very delicate way , true love will always be immortal...Happy new year and hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 12/30/2015 6:15:00 PM
I wish you a million bucks of happiness dear dalia...your comment got me glad
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