Lovers

Pregnant moon blushing
     Clouds sailing along smiling
   lovers holding hands

     Just learned about syllables in Haiku. Updated
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Jeavons Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 10:33 AM
ARBOL, I really like this Haiku. Loved the imagery of the moon and clouds watching the lovers. Very good. Blessings, Susan
Blanca Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 11:44 AM
Thanks. Be well Susan.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 2:20 PM
hello Carlos, this is a beautiful love poem. I have enjoyed reading. have a nice day my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 8:47 AM
Oh! Another lovely write! I am a lover of haikus!
Blanca Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 11:52 AM
Thanks my friend.
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 6:35 PM
so beautiful...that's a winner in my favourites.
Blanca Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 8:18 AM
Your kind words makes me want to define the universe with prose.
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