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Pregnant moon blushing Clouds sailing along smiling lovers holding hands Just learned about syllables in Haiku. Updated

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Date: 1/22/2019 10:33:00 AM
ARBOL, I really like this Haiku. Loved the imagery of the moon and clouds watching the lovers. Very good. Blessings, Susan
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 1/24/2019 11:44:00 AM
Thanks. Be well Susan.
Date: 3/5/2018 2:20:00 PM
hello Carlos, this is a beautiful love poem. I have enjoyed reading. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/30/2018 8:47:00 AM
Oh! Another lovely write! I am a lover of haikus!
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 1/30/2018 11:52:00 AM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 1/29/2018 6:35:00 PM
so beautiful...that's a winner in my favourites.
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 1/30/2018 8:18:00 AM
Your kind words makes me want to define the universe with prose.

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