Lover Friend Lost

I just want you to know,that 
not a single day goes.Wishing 
you were close while I got my 
eyes closed.And its feeling 
like a dream to me,thinking 
someday you can be with me 
but under the circumstances I 
understand that we can never 
be..promised id be there for 
you and you promised you'd 
be there for me.Told you that 
I cared for you and you told 
me that you cared for 
me.Alcohol and 
methadone,no livin life 
carefully.thanks for all the 
memories and good times 
that you shared with 
me..Thats all I needed,yeah 
just to keep me going.told me 
you loved me but that that 
was the drugs showing,and 
now I gotta deal with the 
thought of us never 
knowing.weather we should 
be together or just keep the 
games going...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 8/13/2013 10:17:00 AM
Drugs and alcohol is the destroyer of lives, I feel your sadness for a love that may never be, because of drugs and alcohol , great message within if the sadness and pain addiction dose cause, blessings to you, sueellen
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Date: 7/23/2013 11:06:00 PM
Hello Paul, I read this poem with my daughter this morning. Thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/24/2013 12:17:00 AM
Thank you very much,I'll be around and posting more soon
Date: 7/23/2013 2:59:00 PM
Thanks Royal,I'm glad you did too..and thanks Anne-lose,I look forward to sharing more
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Paul Martinez
Date: 7/23/2013 3:31:00 PM
Lise
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Paul Martinez
Date: 7/23/2013 3:30:00 PM
Anne-lose..i meant
Date: 7/23/2013 12:12:00 PM
- Hello new member: Paul. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/23/2013 3:34:00 PM
Thanks I look forward to sharing more
Date: 7/23/2013 7:19:00 AM
This is deep inner thoughts, we all have one of those what ifs but try looking into what is ... glad I got to read this:)
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Date: 7/23/2013 3:44:00 PM
Thanks i will, its about 4 yrs old..and was originally a verse i wrote for a song.but its real..glad you got to read it
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