Lovenia

that hint of a smile
in your knowing eyes 
chills whatever is left 
of my confidence;

now I feel like a scared 
exclamation point
seeking the tip
of a brave sentence!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 11:29 AM
Beautiful heartfelt poetry you write today Romeo. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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August 18, 2009 at 4:25 AM
My goodness this is good, especailly the last stanza..wow...totally enjoyed.
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