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Lovely wind

Lonely nights come and take me 
Raise me up but don't break me
Lovely wind I can feel your coldness
Touch my skin, play my hair until I become your oldest
Let the time pass so fast...carry me in your arms and make me forget my past ...
Can I continue ? Can I move on ? 
And where is my place if he had gone ?
I can see the flowers but I can't smell it ...lovely wind takes my soul before I kill it 
Can the heart live alone? Can he be cold like a stone? 
I can tell you that his whispers gets through my bones
Oh my lovely wind ! Can he feel my loneliness ?
Can he freeze the time and beat you?  Or your going to freeze me but when you feel my heart , my love will heat you ? 
Are you going to be warm and soft like a feather or you're going to be cold and cruel like the leather?
I can feel you when you touch me when you kill my skin ... is he going to love me or my destiny is going to end ? 
Am I going to dream with him before I die ? Are you going to say yes you will ? Are you going to lie ?
Gentile wind you are my source of truth you're my friend...
Before I fly away make sure that my message will be sent...
Let him feel my love , let him hear my heart beat...
Take my heart and put it in his hands so he can feel my heat ...
Lovely wind thank you but it's time to say goodbye...
Smile for me but on me don't cry...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/11/2016 7:12:00 PM
So many questions, such few answers - Rather fitting when it comes to love! I came back here to see your origins - and I'm impressed, Dalia - "Lovely" descriptive piece.
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 2/13/2016 9:00:00 PM
Thank you very much my dear I surly appreciate your sweet sweet words, and I thank you for your delightful visit I'm really honored and pleased , hugs / / :)
Date: 1/17/2016 10:10:00 AM
wow! powerful lines there...i guess it'll be better if lovely WIND stay forever though
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/17/2016 11:23:00 AM
Lol....yes , thank you my friend for ur lovely comment, hugs / / :)
Date: 12/29/2015 3:28:00 PM
Oh that ending is a true climax of love's fate Dalia. WOW is this genius and sensuality of your deepest need woman! The way you relate to the Wind as a messenger and sympathizer to your heart's skin is so arousing and beautiful! "I can tell you his whispers get through my bones..." the vividness of the feather and leather is incredible. The way you talk to natural forces is truly inspiring Poetess...J.A.B. A FAV!!
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/29/2015 3:34:00 PM
Thank you very very much my friend for ur lovely, sweet and delightful comment , I really do appreciate it , it means alot for me....ur words motivates me to write even more and even better poetry , it an honor for me that you liked it....lot of love and big hug.../ / :D
Date: 12/29/2015 12:39:00 AM
G'day Dalia... pretty powerful verse Dalia for a 16 year old. Well done and keep on writing - happy new year - Lindsay
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/29/2015 5:40:00 AM
Thank you very much my dear for ur supportive words and ur delightful comment , lot of appreciation and lot of hugs...// :)
Date: 10/9/2015 7:51:00 AM
Hi Dalia. Welcome to poetry soup, with a delightful verse as this....
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 10/9/2015 8:12:00 AM
Thanks alot my friend, I appreciate it... Love and hugs :)
Date: 9/21/2015 1:24:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup Dalia. I have enjoyed what you have written since your appearance. Thanks for sharing thus far. Verlena
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 9/21/2015 4:24:00 AM
Thanks alot my dear, I appreciate your support and I'm really thankful for having great people to be a round such as you.
Date: 9/19/2015 7:33:00 PM
Dalia, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 9/19/2015 7:42:00 PM
Thanks alot sweet heart :)i appreciate your support and your kindness my friend with all my love. :) ?
Date: 9/18/2015 11:07:00 AM
Dalia, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 9/18/2015 4:10:00 PM
Hello my dear SKAT I really do appreciate you're kindness I hope we become friends and talk more to each other maybe we can talk on Skype if you want to my Skype name is dshahein I can tell you that I live in jordan I'm Arabian and I'm 19 years old. the poem that I've published I've wrote it when I was 16 year's old I hope you and you're friends to like my poems and to enjoy them it's really a pleasure to contact with such a great person like you wish you all the best