Lovely Portals of the Night

That orbed maiden comes out With the radiant darkness The innumerable stars Hymn written in light. The night walking down the sky With the white fire laden moon More richly hued than the day Makes it more alive. Lovely portals of the night When the stars come out to watch Day die giving glimpses of Immortality. Snow like icicles pointing down Nature’s mysteries infinite Centre all over no circumference Do we deserve to know? Would not like to wish “Good Morn” Or wouldn’t like to wish “Goodbye” Or to drench and drain this beauty” No! Not at least me.
+++++++ March 27, 2014 Dr. Ram Mehta Form: Free Verse: Lines 20 Fourth Place Win Contest: A Night Sky by nette Onclaud
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April 2, 2014 at 12:20 AM
SUCH AN AWESOME WIN...SKAT
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April 1, 2014 at 4:54 PM
I really liked your poem, Dr. Ram. I wish the nighttime would never end, either. This is a very creative and beautiful write. Congratulations on your win, as well!
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April 1, 2014 at 1:56 PM
a swelling heart as expansive as the sky,. dr,. ram.. grreat ending!.. a well-deserved win in my contest!.. best cheers with huggs!
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April 1, 2014 at 4:34 AM
Hi Ram, Congrats on your lovely descriptive poem. Regards Theresaxx
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April 1, 2014 at 3:51 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A NIGHT SKY - Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud, Dr.Ram ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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March 28, 2014 at 9:04 PM
I do so love the line "Night walking down the sky" what a wonderful picture that paints for me !! Loved it!
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