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Lovely Morning

. Reverent, wet grass A quiet spring-filled morning A sanctuary

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Abe Lopez

Date: 9/17/2009 12:21:00 PM

nice write savannah...keep them coming!

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/17/2009 12:09:00 PM

Excellent executed...I see some changes that make for a stronger read. The impact is there with this one...You raised the bar on your work, keep it up and sustain it on this level...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/16/2009 4:11:00 AM

Awwwwwwww, so peaceful. Beautiful. Excellent Haiku Savannah. Love, Carol

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/15/2009 5:45:00 PM

enjoyed this fine haiku! SSH!...jim

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/15/2009 4:25:00 PM

A lovely morning it was, nice and cool...nice work...Raul

Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/15/2009 3:40:00 PM

The images in this perfect Haiku are beautiful! I see we both had "lovey mornings"! Thank you for sharing and your thoughtful comment. Nice to meet you. Love, Robin

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/15/2009 2:31:00 PM

soooooo what's the difference between a string of haiku's and a choka?.....very discriptive verse above! Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/15/2009 1:17:00 PM

Very descriptive and calming. Keep writing. Sara