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Lovely Morning

.                             Reverent, wet grass
                       A quiet spring-filled morning
                                    A sanctuary

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Abe Lopez

September 17, 2009 at 12:21 PM

nice write savannah...keep them coming!

Raul Moreno

September 17, 2009 at 12:09 PM

Excellent executed...I see some changes that make for a stronger read. The impact is there with this one...You raised the bar on your work, keep it up and sustain it on this level...

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 16, 2009 at 4:11 AM

Awwwwwwww, so peaceful. Beautiful. Excellent Haiku Savannah. Love, Carol

James Marshall Goff

September 15, 2009 at 5:45 PM

enjoyed this fine haiku! SSH!...jim

Raul Moreno

September 15, 2009 at 4:25 PM

A lovely morning it was, nice and cool...nice work...Raul

Robin L. Gass

September 15, 2009 at 3:40 PM

The images in this perfect Haiku are beautiful! I see we both had "lovey mornings"! Thank you for sharing and your thoughtful comment. Nice to meet you. Love, Robin