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Lovely Morning

.                             Reverent, wet grass
                       A quiet spring-filled morning
                                    A sanctuary

Copyright © Savannah Rose Harper | Year Posted 2009

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Abe Lopez Date: 9/17/2009 12:21:00 PM nice write savannah...keep them coming! Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 9/17/2009 12:09:00 PM Excellent executed...I see some changes that make for a stronger read. The impact is there with this one...You raised the bar on your work, keep it up and sustain it on this level... Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/16/2009 4:11:00 AM Awwwwwwww, so peaceful. Beautiful. Excellent Haiku Savannah. Love, Carol Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 9/15/2009 5:45:00 PM enjoyed this fine haiku! SSH!...jim Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 9/15/2009 4:25:00 PM A lovely morning it was, nice and cool...nice work...Raul Login to Reply

Robin L. Gass Date: 9/15/2009 3:40:00 PM The images in this perfect Haiku are beautiful! I see we both had "lovey mornings"! Thank you for sharing and your thoughtful comment. Nice to meet you. Love, Robin Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 9/15/2009 2:31:00 PM soooooo what's the difference between a string of haiku's and a choka?.....very discriptive verse above! Light & Love Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/15/2009 1:17:00 PM Very descriptive and calming. Keep writing. Sara Login to Reply