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Lovely Little Lady

lovely little lady, no need to be shady. to my heart, I can not be torn apart. Please lay in my bed, rest your head. Play a song, you make me belong. lovely little lady, I'll love you till your eighty.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 2:01:00 AM

sweet

Gerald Kithinji

Date: 8/13/2013 3:52:00 PM

There she goes... lovely little lady!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 11:34:00 AM

Congratulations, with your winning poem .... xox~ PD

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/1/2013 5:50:00 PM

Very nicely written with witty rhyme scheme and imaged perfectly. COngrats on your win in the contest :)

John Posey

Date: 6/30/2013 5:44:00 PM

Nicely done. wit and humor mix well with talent....Congrats... Jake

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 6/30/2013 9:03:00 AM

very nice poem of yours friend DX..Congratulations on your win. cheers!! hugs, Maria

Skat A

Date: 6/29/2013 3:44:00 PM

DX, :-) Congratulations in the Rhyming contest. I'm enjoying all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

Seren Roberts

Date: 6/14/2013 3:13:00 PM

Great couplet Dom ...Seren

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/13/2013 2:20:00 PM

nice couplets PD

Skat A

Date: 6/13/2013 1:56:00 PM

psssssssss..... i'm imagining what hits the floor at the age of 80

Skat A

Date: 6/13/2013 1:43:00 PM

Hi Mandy, and Dx. I read this poem and may others, I have all of Dx poems open right now. LOL. I am still working on commenting his older poems. and this one is very cute. lovely. .......... SKAT

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/13/2013 12:51:00 PM

Hi there i was recommended to look at this one so I am and they are right it is cute, I wonder why no comment was left by the recommendee..and i hope you do love until you're 80 xx