Lovely Lilly

lovely Lilly with luscious lips
with warm wonderful swaying hips
her breathtaking kiss
is heavenly bliss
but cant dance a lick always trips

A New Bawdy or Humorous Limerick Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
2/16/22
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Kitchin Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 4:32 PM
Tim, a fun one, loved the last line, congratulations on your winning placement!
Mcguire Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 7:34 PM
Thank you Tania! The best to you and yours.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 5:54 AM
Very funny, Timothy! Congratulations!
Mcguire Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 4:00 PM
Thank you Kim!
Alex Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 5:44 AM
Lovely lily. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Mcguire Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 4:01 PM
Thank you so much Christuraj!
Gauthier Avatar
March 1, 2022 at 9:19 AM
Delightful. Well at least Lilly has her luscious lips, just keep her off the dance floor. lol
Mcguire Avatar
March 1, 2022 at 6:53 PM
YUP! :)
Laurie Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 3:58 PM
G'day Timothy ... perhaps Lily has other interests with those attributes - thank you Timothy - Lindsay
Mcguire Avatar
February 28, 2022 at 3:44 PM
You are probably right Lindsay!
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