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Lovely Lilly

lovely Lilly with luscious lips with warm wonderful swaying hips her breathtaking kiss is heavenly bliss but cant dance a lick always trips A New Bawdy or Humorous Limerick Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 2/16/22

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Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/7/2022 4:32:00 PM

Tim, a fun one, loved the last line, congratulations on your winning placement!

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/7/2022 7:34:00 PM

Thank you Tania! The best to you and yours.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/6/2022 5:54:00 AM

Very funny, Timothy! Congratulations!

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/7/2022 4:00:00 PM

Thank you Kim!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/6/2022 5:44:00 AM

Lovely lily. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/7/2022 4:01:00 PM

Thank you so much Christuraj!

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/1/2022 9:19:00 AM

Delightful. Well at least Lilly has her luscious lips, just keep her off the dance floor. lol

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/1/2022 6:53:00 PM

YUP! :)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/20/2022 3:58:00 PM

G'day Timothy ... perhaps Lily has other interests with those attributes - thank you Timothy - Lindsay

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/28/2022 3:44:00 PM

You are probably right Lindsay!