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Lovely Ideas

Paper’s blank stare haunting frigid winter breeze mocking musings warm notions memories revelries and illusory moments haunting scenes hues vignettes an ineffable sacred history inundates overcomes my senses false fashions these delusions evocative and sublime beguiling vacated slowly razed gutted cast asunder aside irretrievable taunting lovely ideas recede languish and diminish weaken lovely ideas influence eviscerated tomb of unmistakable oblivion. (click on picture for Angst & Anger)

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/28/2020 4:03:00 PM

Hello Rob Levasseur, Done well. enjoy your evening my friend.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/27/2020 7:06:00 AM

Thought provoking writing... God B L E S S you my enchanting and charming poet. With love, Gina

Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/27/2020 7:49:00 AM

Yeah, you're right. I just wanted some real poetry in the contest, not some of the broken lines of prose posing as a poem. I can't change the perimeters of the contest now. But your poem no doubt would have been a winner. It is so exceptional.

Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/27/2020 7:48:00 AM

Thank you for your comments. I appreciate you reading my poetry.

Regina Mcintosh
Date: 12/27/2020 7:07:00 AM

PS: I was thinking of entering a different poem in your contest... the one you suggested me to but it's not a rhyme form and your contest is set up to only allow rhyme forms? Just mentioning since you suggested I enter that specific poem and I do like it