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Lovely Ideas

Paper’s blank stare
haunting
frigid winter breeze
mocking
musings warm notions
memories
revelries and illusory
moments
haunting scenes hues
vignettes
an ineffable sacred
history
inundates overcomes my
senses
false fashions these
delusions
evocative and sublime
beguiling
vacated slowly razed
gutted
cast asunder aside
irretrievable
taunting lovely ideas
recede
languish and diminish
weaken
lovely ideas influence
eviscerated
tomb of unmistakable
oblivion.


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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/28/2020 4:03:00 PM

Hello Rob Levasseur, Done well. enjoy your evening my friend.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/27/2020 7:06:00 AM

Thought provoking writing... God B L E S S you my enchanting and charming poet. With love, Gina

Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/27/2020 7:49:00 AM

Yeah, you're right. I just wanted some real poetry in the contest, not some of the broken lines of prose posing as a poem. I can't change the perimeters of the contest now. But your poem no doubt would have been a winner. It is so exceptional.

Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/27/2020 7:48:00 AM

Thank you for your comments. I appreciate you reading my poetry.

Regina Mcintosh
Date: 12/27/2020 7:07:00 AM

PS: I was thinking of entering a different poem in your contest... the one you suggested me to but it's not a rhyme form and your contest is set up to only allow rhyme forms? Just mentioning since you suggested I enter that specific poem and I do like it