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fallen

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Lovely Daubs In Fall

fall
is spring
in reverse
green leaves, bud bursts,
shrivel to brown, red,
tumble down and crumble

making pastel collage
dabbles of purple
orange, yellow
scattered in
lovely
daubs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ashley Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 7:27 PM
Dear John, your creative pen spills with Fall beauty. Wonderfully expressed imagery of autumn leaves in a bittersweet but beautiful demise. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Roper Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 10:50 AM
Great cool brisk feeling and imagery , John, congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 6:05 AM
congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed.
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