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Lovely Chauffeur

Lovely Chauffeur by Rick Rucker While riding in the car were we, She turned to me, suddenly, Then, right out, without preamble, My disordered life, she turned into a shamble! "We haven't been dating all that long," "But for two in Love, living apart is wrong!" Good thing she was behind the wheel, My legs, I could no longer feel! In these last months, I mounted a campaign, To win this maiden, but this just fried my brain! The issue hadn't been neglected, Still, this was quite unexpected! In my mind, I'd set an ambitious goal, In a year, to change my status to "us," from "sole." This was even faster still, I kept from screaming, by sheer will! Christmas was but yesterday, I didn't see that my greatest gift would come today! Nothing in this life is certain, But before her, I was really hurtin' I know I love her, and she, me, I believe we'll be in Love eternally. None of this is written in Stone, But neither wants to live Alone! We'll give it our best shot! I'm a lucky guy, she's REALLY HOT!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/27/2010 7:19:00 PM
congrats to you and your "hot' lady..your stuff and her stuff will be YOUR stuff..lol. BG
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Date: 12/27/2010 6:04:00 AM
Thanks for introducing "she" in your life behind the wheel, best luck in yur pursuit, Rick. Ilike the light humor in the poem
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Date: 12/27/2010 12:16:00 AM
What a delightful write Rick, your ending left me smiling. She's not just lovely, she is hot as well ;-)
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