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Lovely Be'eth Nature

Nature is beautiful 
Nature is wonderful 
Wonderful to watch 
Wonderful to see 
See the mountains 
See the trees 
Trees with colours 
Trees with flowers  
Flowers in bloom 
Flowers of fragrance 
Fragrance so divine 
Fragrance of smell 
Smell the flowers 
Smell the roses 
Roses of red 
Roses of yellow 
Yellow as sun 
Yellow as skies 
Skies with purple 
Skies with colours 
Colours of nature 
Colours of green 
Green as grass 
Green as leaves 
Leaves turned orange 
Leaves turned brown 
Brown as wood 
Brown as earth 
Earth so rich 
Earth with growth 
Growth of nature 
Growth of life 
Life of Beauty 
Life to hold 
Hold in thought 
Hold in memories 
Memories you'll love 
Memories you'll keep 
Keep in heart 
Keep yours forever 
Forever and forever 
Forever to enjoy 
Enjoy the nature 
Enjoy the beauty
Beauty of nature 
Beauty so lovely 
Lovely... 
Nature...

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Sara Kendrick Date: 2/19/2024 9:47:00 AM Congratulations on your winning work in Silent One's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara K Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 2/17/2024 10:58:00 AM Charlie my cowboy friend... You wrote an excellent blitz, but sadly, you got the title wrong... its supposed to be the first letter in the 3rd and 47th line... however, I still gave you a honourable mention for your efforts.. Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 2/20/2024 3:53:00 AM Howdy partner... Yippie ki Aye! (LOL) Dang, another one I rush into without reading correctly. It was a great contest...Thanks so much for my HM, SO...much appreciated!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/13/2024 8:30:00 AM so that is how you do blitz. A great example for me. I must review the rules and give it a try. Great job, Charles. Login to Reply

Hiya Sharma Date: 1/13/2024 5:36:00 AM Oh wow, what a fascinating Blitz this is, dear Charles! I'm absolutely in awe of the imagery and vividness that you've painted within few words, making all the lines flow together so effortlessly.. This just reads in continuation, so perfectly! Every word adds to the beauty of thus poem.. Amazingly done, enjoyed reading this.. Best of luck for the contest! :) Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/13/2024 2:12:00 AM Loved your blitz. So visual with imagery. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/11/2024 9:31:00 AM What a wonderful/creative write. Nature is all of these. Love It... Have Blessed day writing away....................... Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 1/11/2024 6:32:00 AM Wow you did it just effortlessly! And your lines are so easy to read too! Brilliant blitz! This should do well! I love the way you’ve started too and how the rest just goes so well together. Excellent! A fave for me! Login to Reply