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Lovely Be'eth Nature

Nature is beautiful Nature is wonderful Wonderful to watch Wonderful to see See the mountains See the trees Trees with colours Trees with flowers Flowers in bloom Flowers of fragrance Fragrance so divine Fragrance of smell Smell the flowers Smell the roses Roses of red Roses of yellow Yellow as sun Yellow as skies Skies with purple Skies with colours Colours of nature Colours of green Green as grass Green as leaves Leaves turned orange Leaves turned brown Brown as wood Brown as earth Earth so rich Earth with growth Growth of nature Growth of life Life of Beauty Life to hold Hold in thought Hold in memories Memories you'll love Memories you'll keep Keep in heart Keep yours forever Forever and forever Forever to enjoy Enjoy the nature Enjoy the beauty Beauty of nature Beauty so lovely Lovely... Nature...

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/19/2024 9:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work in Silent One's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 2/17/2024 10:58:00 AM

Charlie my cowboy friend... You wrote an excellent blitz, but sadly, you got the title wrong... its supposed to be the first letter in the 3rd and 47th line... however, I still gave you a honourable mention for your efforts..

Charles Messina
Date: 2/20/2024 3:53:00 AM

Howdy partner... Yippie ki Aye! (LOL) Dang, another one I rush into without reading correctly. It was a great contest...Thanks so much for my HM, SO...much appreciated!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2024 8:30:00 AM

so that is how you do blitz. A great example for me. I must review the rules and give it a try. Great job, Charles.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/13/2024 5:36:00 AM

Oh wow, what a fascinating Blitz this is, dear Charles! I'm absolutely in awe of the imagery and vividness that you've painted within few words, making all the lines flow together so effortlessly.. This just reads in continuation, so perfectly! Every word adds to the beauty of thus poem.. Amazingly done, enjoyed reading this.. Best of luck for the contest! :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/13/2024 2:12:00 AM

Loved your blitz. So visual with imagery.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/11/2024 1:22:00 PM

Wow, fantastic blitz, Charles! I may have to try this form...although it's not easy I can appreciate the creativity and focus you needed. Nicely done, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/11/2024 9:31:00 AM

What a wonderful/creative write. Nature is all of these. Love It... Have Blessed day writing away.......................

Ink Empress

Date: 1/11/2024 6:32:00 AM

Wow you did it just effortlessly! And your lines are so easy to read too! Brilliant blitz! This should do well! I love the way you’ve started too and how the rest just goes so well together. Excellent! A fave for me!