Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

Lovelorn

Empty mass, devoid and vast,
Our parting words will be our last
And, oh, my Heart- in Death to cast!
For I cannot endure to relive the past
If you should go, you will steal my Soul
As half of me would become a hole
And left, sadly, to never know
How I could ever love you so...

**Gothic or Romantic Contest Entry
~JustThatArchaicPoet

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Kelly Deschler October 24, 2013 at 2:19 PM I know exactly how you felt when you wrote this one...A deeply emotional and very heartfelt poem, BP! I loved it! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you very much for the kind comments! Just That Archaic Poet October 24, 2013 at 2:26 PM I have nothing but mad love for you, SP; thanks for making me smile <3

Skat A October 23, 2013 at 12:43 PM CONGRATS in Giorgio's awesome "Gothic or Romantic contest" enjoy your day.................... LOVE -- SKAT Just That Archaic Poet October 23, 2013 at 1:00 PM Thanks, Linda! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta October 23, 2013 at 8:06 AM Congrats on the win in the contest, AP Just That Archaic Poet October 23, 2013 at 1:00 PM Thanks, Doc; I appreciate everyone stopping by :)

Poet Destroyer A October 22, 2013 at 10:00 PM nice win...PD Just That Archaic Poet October 23, 2013 at 7:00 AM Much appreciated, Linda :)

Karen Anglesey October 22, 2013 at 8:46 PM Congrats on the win in Georgio's contest. Another superb write from your pen. Just That Archaic Poet October 23, 2013 at 7:00 AM <3 <3 <3 :)

Richard Lamoureux August 22, 2013 at 7:31 PM Very romantic and heartbreaking. I have added you to my favorite poets list. Just That Archaic Poet August 22, 2013 at 8:56 PM I am quite flattered. The encouragement and support I have found here has been immense, overwhelming and, moreover, quite surprising. The people here are genuine and kind, and it means the world to me. When I message you, I will explain why :)