Loveliness Poem

L~etting out a gasp, the young man stared at the pretty face.
O~pening the curtains, he noticed a 
V~eil covering the beautiful 
E~ndearing visage of a young 
L~ady who sat upon purple velvet cushions.
I~side  was the decor of the patterned interior of
N~eedlework with gold and purple threads.
E~nsuring that the horses were well fastened, the footman
S~lid some cushioned steps before the carriage doors;
S~o that this adorable lady may step down. How gorgeous she looked!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Promise Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 1:05 PM
I'm in the midst of recording my poems by voice; and the POEM where Th instruction was to use this poem and write/ergo with a new one (I got third place), is damsel not there!!!????
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March 18, 2016 at 11:28 AM
This is one of the bright part of a moody day as today for me. I am blessed reading this piece. Keep on writing lovely. cheers!
Promise Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 10:24 PM
Thank you for your generous comment Funom, I'm glad soothe your "moody" day. Glad that God blessed you with this piece.
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