Notes About The Poem

Loveliness of Buds

L ight of evening arrives on its accord
O pening a mantle for spring’s preview…
V ast the earth toned in rose-white, and though
E ver cold, I roam the garden to admire
L ittle buds waking on dewy mist, while
I llumined stars flame against a pale sky.
N owhere can grandeur find pure beauty when
E ach quiver, each throb of blooms enthralls my 
S pirit, to restore an inner glow that whirls,
S haping their arms, my arms… birth of night’s florets!



For John Hamilton, Loveliness Acrostic Contest
2/16/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A. Sharma Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 12:30 AM
So so lovely nette.. congrats on yet another win!
A   Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 1:08 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your wonderful "Loveliness-Acrostic" win. ~LINDA~
Hamilton Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 9:56 AM
Very beautiful visuals, very well written you never disappoint Nette thanks for your entry!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 9:32 AM
I like your natural approach. Hugs Rick.
Scars Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 9:10 AM
Nette, beautiful imagery...congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo
Delaney Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 8:57 PM
The glory of nature's loveliness captured in a freeze frame. How beautiful to read, SuZ
Lindley Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 2:40 PM
Exceptionally great verse my friend. The entire body of work has its on very unique loveliness. A7
Davey Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 8:01 PM
Very therapeutic and lovely as always
Turner Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Such a beautiful expression of spring. I've been walking my yard and have noticed the early buds. I could not express my feelings this eloquently. A7+
Christian Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 3:18 PM
lovely poem, I love spring when all the buds start to blossom, I love Easter the new life and everything.
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 2:55 PM
Interesting work..I enjoyed reading t his one today..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Ongado Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 1:24 PM
Isn't it lovely to just be part of a nature -scene unfolding in front of you and being a witness to this wonder? One of the things I shall always remember is being there when my dog was giving birth to puppies. i was stumped, muck like this special poem.
Andresen Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 12:18 PM
- The earth small children .... - beautiful Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bickerstaffe Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 11:37 AM
What a beautiful ACROSTIC... so smooth in its development with lovely phrasing and lots of luscious imagery. Well done! Keith
Em Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 11:01 AM
This exquisite nature poem captures the spirit of a woman's soul in a very intricate, lovely way. I enjoy watching buds flowering in any season as my Mother loves to plant.
Scars Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 10:58 AM
Nete, perfect for the contest! Good luck! :)-luloo
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