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L ight of evening arrives on its accord O pening a mantle for spring’s preview… V ast the earth toned in rose-white, and though E ver cold, I roam the garden to admire L ittle buds waking on dewy mist, while I llumined stars flame against a pale sky. N owhere can grandeur find pure beauty when E ach quiver, each throb of blooms enthralls my S pirit, to restore an inner glow that whirls, S haping their arms, my arms… birth of night’s florets! For John Hamilton, Loveliness Acrostic Contest 2/16/2016

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Date: 2/23/2016 12:30:00 AM
So so lovely nette.. congrats on yet another win!
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:08:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your wonderful "Loveliness-Acrostic" win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:56:00 AM
Very beautiful visuals, very well written you never disappoint Nette thanks for your entry!
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:32:00 AM
I like your natural approach. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:10:00 AM
Nette, beautiful imagery...congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo
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Date: 2/17/2016 8:57:00 PM
The glory of nature's loveliness captured in a freeze frame. How beautiful to read, SuZ
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:40:00 PM
Exceptionally great verse my friend. The entire body of work has its on very unique loveliness. A7
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Date: 2/16/2016 8:01:00 PM
Very therapeutic and lovely as always
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Date: 2/16/2016 5:29:00 PM
Such a beautiful expression of spring. I've been walking my yard and have noticed the early buds. I could not express my feelings this eloquently. A7+
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Date: 2/16/2016 3:18:00 PM
lovely poem, I love spring when all the buds start to blossom, I love Easter the new life and everything.
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Date: 2/16/2016 2:55:00 PM
Interesting work..I enjoyed reading t his one today..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 2/16/2016 1:24:00 PM
Isn't it lovely to just be part of a nature -scene unfolding in front of you and being a witness to this wonder? One of the things I shall always remember is being there when my dog was giving birth to puppies. i was stumped, muck like this special poem.
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Date: 2/16/2016 12:18:00 PM
- The earth small children .... - beautiful Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/16/2016 11:37:00 AM
What a beautiful ACROSTIC... so smooth in its development with lovely phrasing and lots of luscious imagery. Well done! Keith
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Date: 2/16/2016 11:01:00 AM
This exquisite nature poem captures the spirit of a woman's soul in a very intricate, lovely way. I enjoy watching buds flowering in any season as my Mother loves to plant.
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Date: 2/16/2016 10:58:00 AM
Nete, perfect for the contest! Good luck! :)-luloo
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