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Loveliness Contest

Loveliness Contest
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Lady of my life carrying so much wonder with an

Opal birthstone, a gem to match her smile, she's

Vivacious by nature and brown eyes sparkling...

Ella Rose, my spring fountain sprays while

Latticed hands held crossing the street with

Induced electricity sparking my fire

Naughty while working on her homework and

Elated when her daddy comes home

Sassy days indeed, still perfect in my eyes but...

Shhh...my lovely lady sleeps like an angel


Date Written: February 12, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/23/2016 12:31:00 AM
Very well written.. big congrats on ur win Laura.
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Date: 2/22/2016 5:42:00 PM
Congrats well written xxxx
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Date: 2/22/2016 3:39:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/22/2016 10:01:00 AM
Thanks Laura such a lovely entry, congrats on your nice placement.
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:37:00 AM
One of my personal favorites, congrats.
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Date: 2/13/2016 11:25:00 AM
a lovely write for your daughter...good luck in the contest...
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Date: 2/14/2016 10:17:00 PM
Thank you Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 2/12/2016 3:26:00 PM
You're blessed! Beautiful poem :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/12/2016 3:29:00 PM
Thank you Carol :)*smiles* -luloo
Date: 2/12/2016 2:35:00 PM
aww this is delightful LuLoo our children are so so precious - a lovely tribute:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/12/2016 3:28:00 PM
Thank you lovely lady Jan :) *smiles* -luloo
Date: 2/12/2016 2:35:00 PM
how heartfelt this is, lou... so beautiful is your write and daughter too!..huggs
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Date: 2/12/2016 3:28:00 PM
Thank you Nette :) *smiles* -luloo

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