Loveliness Contest

Loveliness Contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton


Lady of my life carrying so much wonder with an

Opal birthstone, a gem to match her smile, she's

Vivacious by nature and brown eyes sparkling...

Ella Rose, my spring fountain sprays while

Latticed hands held crossing the street with

Induced electricity sparking my fire

Naughty while working on her homework and

Elated when her daddy comes home

Sassy days indeed, still perfect in my eyes but...

Shhh...my lovely lady sleeps like an angel


Date Written: February 12, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A. Sharma Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 12:31 AM
Very well written.. big congrats on ur win Laura.
Rycroft Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 5:42 PM
Congrats well written xxxx
Allison Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 3:39 PM
Dropping back with my congrats LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 10:01 AM
Thanks Laura such a lovely entry, congrats on your nice placement.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 9:37 AM
One of my personal favorites, congrats.
Adams Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 11:25 AM
a lovely write for your daughter...good luck in the contest...
Scars Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 10:17 PM
Thank you Sandra :)-luloo
B. Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 3:26 PM
You're blessed! Beautiful poem :)
Scars Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 3:29 PM
Thank you Carol :)*smiles* -luloo
Onclaud Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 2:35 PM
how heartfelt this is, lou... so beautiful is your write and daughter too!..huggs
Scars Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Thank you Nette :) *smiles* -luloo
Allison Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 2:35 PM
aww this is delightful LuLoo our children are so so precious - a lovely tribute:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Thank you lovely lady Jan :) *smiles* -luloo
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