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Lying beneath the parasol we listened as the rains stormed the castle, Obstructing our beach date behind bastions of fog and shadowy palls; Voluptuous curtains of crimson covered your lips as you drew in close, Eloquently reminding me that I was, at this moment, the luckiest man; Loving your dulcet laughter was when I knew, your vivacity won the day, It drowned out the rains and detangled the nervous jitters of a boy-man; Never allowing me to forget that this might be the beginning of my Life, Ever easy to recall --the ever-clever jokes I told you, one after another, So intoxicated with your happiness that I forgot to check on my smile, Still there to this day, every morning that I wake next to you, my Love. February 16, 2016

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Date: 3/2/2016 12:33:00 AM
How romantic indeed!! Congrats Sam
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Sam Jameson
Date: 3/2/2016 8:11:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Carlene. I'm very happy you the words connected with you..have a wonderful day!
Date: 2/23/2016 9:19:00 AM
Wonderfully romantic. Very well deserved top spot. Cheers, Bobby
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/23/2016 12:11:00 PM
Thank you, Bobby. Very kind words, much appreciated. I'm glad you enjoyed the work my friend, ciao!
Date: 2/23/2016 1:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this #1 beautifully written romantic poem. Enjoyed it.
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/23/2016 7:10:00 AM
Thank you, Susan. I'm very happy the work was able to connect and that you enjoyed the read.
Date: 2/23/2016 12:24:00 AM
Very well written.. big congrats on ur win Sam!
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/23/2016 7:09:00 AM
Thank you Dr., I appreciate the praises..have a wonderful day!
Date: 2/22/2016 5:33:00 PM
Congrats well written xxxx
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/22/2016 7:33:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Wendy. I'm glad you enjoyed the read.
Date: 2/22/2016 4:27:00 PM
Very lovely, Sam. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Sandra
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/22/2016 7:32:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. I appreciate the kindness towards the work, I'm very glad you found some joy in the read :)
Date: 2/22/2016 1:04:00 PM
Hi Sam, Congratulations on your #1 win, it's the best and well deserved. Love LINDA
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/22/2016 1:16:00 PM
Well that's very nice of you to say, Linda. Thank you so much for your warm regards on the work, it means a lot to me.
Date: 2/22/2016 9:05:00 AM
Not familiar with your work but this was dazzling.34/34 for me was perfect! Congrats on your shared 1st place!
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/22/2016 11:22:00 AM
My work is glad to make your acquaintance ;) thank you kindly, John, for the wonderful remarks. I am honored the work has placed so well...I truly enjoyed the write. Thank you for sponsoring this, I look forward to future chances to create and compete. Thanks again, this is great.
Date: 2/17/2016 5:42:00 PM
wow, what an awesome ending and a romantic poem. I LOVE this.
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/17/2016 6:50:00 PM
thank you, Andrea. I'm very glad that the words connected, always one of my goals when putting up new pieces of work. Thanks for the read, and the kind remarks, ciao!

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