Lovelifted

A gift
Like a sweet kiss
Laid at my feet, upbeat 
Of the heart, joined souls, sweetest bliss
Lives on.

A song
Like a river
Flowing between canyons
Grateful for its air of moisture
Fragrance.

A dance 
In rapid steps 
Sometimes in slow motion
Of a spirit, receiving new precepts
Opens.

A love
Rose like the dawn
In a warm orange glow
Filling my life with a new song
Awed soul.

By CarolineCecile
Copyright © 03/29/10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Owens Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 7:47 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed...Marty
Fraser Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 10:29 AM
Lovely Cinquain Caroline, sweet write >> James
Bono Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 3:10 PM
Just stopping by to wish you a Happy Easter.
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 1:04 AM
This is very lovely, Caroline. I got the results of the numerology up in a blog too if you want to see it. Luv,Andrea
Bono Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 9:22 PM
so much love you have to give.I posted a couple more poems.One is for a rambling poets contest.Mu assignment was friendship. Take a peak if you get a chance.Hop all is well.
Byrne Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 8:45 PM
very impressive!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 4:15 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight Caroline .. a lovely piece of poetic genius ..thankxxx for your lovely comments on my poetry also.. and thankxxx for encouragement too..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Kendrick Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 4:12 PM
Great write in this one..Very expressive and descriptive.. Sara
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