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Loveliest Unicorn

No one had ever seen a lovelier, daintier unicorn. He was the most gracious one who was ever born. He never bragged about his oversized horn. Instead, was humble, and made no one forlorn. He had the manners of a well-bred king of kings. A knowledge of mystical, magical, powerful ethereal things. He was a wizard at predicting things that came true And he was never dour, sad, angry, mean or blue. We loved this unicorn, and we told him as much. He appreciated this and shared his magical touch. He shared his food, his wife, his children and his bed. Uh-oh, Can I please rewrite that last sentence instead….

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Date: 3/15/2022 11:02:00 PM
Cute poem with a unique, ending twist. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/16/2022 7:28:00 AM
I had to rhyme and Trixie threw that idea at me.
Date: 3/15/2022 3:47:00 PM
Lovely the Unicorn that steps on my front porch, the healing powers I could sure use. :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/16/2022 7:29:00 AM
I had forgotten they were healers. New poem idea now.
Date: 3/15/2022 1:37:00 PM
haha, I enjoyed the joke at the end!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/16/2022 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 3/15/2022 10:56:00 AM
(chuckling) Yeah, I think maybe he was a bit too sharing! (still chuckling)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/15/2022 11:49:00 AM
I am glad I could delight you today Hank.

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