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Loveletters

Written in the sand
my deep unspoken longing;
Where tide washed away.

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Mohan Chutani

May 22, 2020 at 7:57 AM

JCB, a very very close to heart feeling when things get washed away like that. Best. Mohan

Debjani Mitra

May 13, 2020 at 4:49 AM

Sooo. touching..I could almost vividly see the writing being washed away..

Evelyn Judy Buehler

May 3, 2020 at 11:22 PM

Sometimes others don't know what is truly in our hearts. A superb haiku, JCB.

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 27, 2020 at 4:34 AM

A masterful , Haiku dear JCB. Take care

Nick Armbrister Jimmy Boom Semtex

April 25, 2020 at 2:40 PM

some things are beyond words

Caren Krutsinger

April 16, 2020 at 8:09 PM

Longing should reside deep in the sand.

Richard Lamoureux

April 15, 2020 at 9:18 AM

Great imagery and salient emotion.

Kim Rodrigues

April 15, 2020 at 8:25 AM

I love brevity. It sings with a precise image. It is like the joy of seeing an image in the clouds. Lovely one, JCB

Jc Hawkens

April 14, 2020 at 8:34 PM

This takes my breathe away..... Beautiful! JC Hawkens

Connie Marcum Wong

April 14, 2020 at 4:04 PM

Once written they hold steadfast in your memory the tide cannot touch. This is beautiful JCB! Aloha, Connie xxoo

Harry Horsman

April 13, 2020 at 11:59 PM

Love the message here, wonderful haiku

John Watt

April 13, 2020 at 7:23 PM

Some love letters I've written I would be happy to have washed away by a wave, lol! Nice haiku, poetess!

Andrea Dietrich

April 13, 2020 at 5:32 PM

ohhhh, this is nice. I really like it.

JC Brul

April 13, 2020 at 5:39 PM

Happy to know you like this dear poet Andrea. Stay safe and warm.

Gershon Wolf

April 13, 2020 at 2:00 PM

Gotta carve 'em on a tree! LOL. ~ Gershon

JC Brul

April 13, 2020 at 5:27 PM

Haha..thank you dear poet Gershon...I have written a couplet sometime ago about a name carved in a tree. Stay safe and well.

Paul Callus

April 13, 2020 at 1:37 PM

Unspoken words, but the feelings are what matter most! One of my first poems on Soup incidentally was similar, entitled "Unspoken Words". ~ Regards // paul

JC Brul

April 13, 2020 at 5:29 PM

Agreed, dear poet Paul. Thank you for your feedback.. I will go through that poem.