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Loveletters

Written in the sand my deep unspoken longing; Where tide washed away.

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Mohan Chutani

Date: 5/22/2020 7:57:00 AM

JCB, a very very close to heart feeling when things get washed away like that. Best. Mohan

Debjani Mitra

Date: 5/13/2020 4:49:00 AM

Sooo. touching..I could almost vividly see the writing being washed away..

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/3/2020 11:22:00 PM

Sometimes others don't know what is truly in our hearts. A superb haiku, JCB.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/27/2020 4:34:00 AM

A masterful , Haiku dear JCB. Take care

Nick Armbrister Jimmy Boom Semtex

Date: 4/25/2020 2:40:00 PM

some things are beyond words

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/16/2020 8:09:00 PM

Longing should reside deep in the sand.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/15/2020 9:18:00 AM

Great imagery and salient emotion.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/15/2020 8:25:00 AM

I love brevity. It sings with a precise image. It is like the joy of seeing an image in the clouds. Lovely one, JCB

Jc Hawkens

Date: 4/14/2020 8:34:00 PM

This takes my breathe away..... Beautiful! JC Hawkens

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/14/2020 4:04:00 PM

Once written they hold steadfast in your memory the tide cannot touch. This is beautiful JCB! Aloha, Connie xxoo

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/13/2020 11:59:00 PM

Love the message here, wonderful haiku

John Watt

Date: 4/13/2020 7:23:00 PM

Some love letters I've written I would be happy to have washed away by a wave, lol! Nice haiku, poetess!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2020 5:32:00 PM

ohhhh, this is nice. I really like it.

Jcb Brul
Date: 4/13/2020 5:39:00 PM

Happy to know you like this dear poet Andrea. Stay safe and warm.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/13/2020 2:00:00 PM

Gotta carve 'em on a tree! LOL. ~ Gershon

Jcb Brul
Date: 4/13/2020 5:27:00 PM

Haha..thank you dear poet Gershon...I have written a couplet sometime ago about a name carved in a tree. Stay safe and well.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/13/2020 1:37:00 PM

Unspoken words, but the feelings are what matter most! One of my first poems on Soup incidentally was similar, entitled "Unspoken Words". ~ Regards // paul

Jcb Brul
Date: 4/13/2020 5:29:00 PM

Agreed, dear poet Paul. Thank you for your feedback.. I will go through that poem.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/13/2020 12:40:00 PM

Love the image JC, can see the water washing those letters away. Tom