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Loveless Life

Comfort, luxury and accumulated wealth is nothing Promise of beauty to the garden is spring in the offing Separated from soul a body is of no avail Without love life is not worth living

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Diana Mohammed

Date: 4/29/2012 2:41:00 PM

Hm...Your true words brought to mind what is written "If I have not love I have nothing"..Thanks for sharing this ...Love Diana

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 4/30/2012 12:28:00 PM

Thanks Diana for your encouraging comments. I am grateful

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 3/20/2012 3:47:00 PM

Hello Mohammad, Two profound statements here in this beautiful and well written Quatrain. Alas, it is true, without love it is indeed a sad and lonely journey. Thank you for reading me and leaving such nice messages. As Always, Shar

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 3/21/2012 8:19:00 AM

Thank you Sharon for your profound message. I am deeply touched

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/2/2012 8:19:00 PM

What you say is so true; without love life is so empty and meaningless. Such a lovely verse to share! :)

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/3/2012 11:08:00 AM

Elizabeth, thanks for appreciating my Quatrain. I am so glad you liked it. -Mohammad

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/3/2011 1:56:00 PM

To not feel love is to not exist...Love is the fuel of the universe. Wonderful thots, poet. Wonderful.

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 11/3/2011 6:21:00 PM

Thanks Gwendolen for your thought provoking comments. Beautiful thoughts. -Mohammad

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/1/2011 6:26:00 PM

I thought this poem was pretty awesome. I like the style and the message it gives. Keep up the wonderful work!!! Always, Laura

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 11/1/2011 7:03:00 PM

Thanks Laura for your appreciation of my Quatrain. I am grateful. -Mohammad

M.I.A .

Date: 10/29/2011 5:04:00 AM

simple yet so true!

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/29/2011 6:28:00 PM

Thanks for your appreciation, mia. I am glad you liked my Quatrain. -Mohammad

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 9/16/2011 7:26:00 AM

This is magnificent uncle Yamin. I can only dream of writing at this level.

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 9/16/2011 11:36:00 AM

I appreciate your modesty, Husain. The fact is that you are highly skilled. Of course you can write like me -nay better than me. What can make a difference is the advantage of age and experience. At your age you are not expected to experience many things that a philosopher poet has experienced at the age of 73. This is what makes the difference. Cheer up.

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/15/2011 10:44:00 PM

Great insight, Mohammad..and wisdom here. Love can be elusive when we're too busy searching for it; maybe we should instead be giving it, I think. Have a great weekend. Love, annalise

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 9/16/2011 11:47:00 AM

Thanks for your brilliant comments, Annalise. How right you are when you say, "Love can be elusive when we are ....searching for it; may be we should instead be giving it". The fact is you can't get love by pursuing it. Love is only given. You can take it only when given. Best wishes. -Mohammad