Get Your Premium Membership

Loveless Days

Blood spilled upon the British skies Her eyes drained my soul Asserted love in bad places has forever taken over I leave the stoned windowed motel without anymore wishes I pray for nothing now I couldn't tell if it was morning birth or noon exposed I jump the scene and the cold moments looking to hang onto sharpened blue clouds You've burned me woman You've pressed the flame upon my skin-analyzed my thoughts and sin,preached to all the broken men,men like me who move with wind But we're gone aren't we baby? Her eyes drained my soul Blood spilled upon the British skies I died on your Monday evening

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/22/2010 11:29:00 AM
wow this was a great piece i loved the imagery and and the topic it was sad in a pretty way.loved it. =)Jo
Login to Reply
Date: 9/10/2009 3:26:00 AM
Very descriptive writing. Keep writing. Sara
Login to Reply