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Loved You the First Time

Loved you the first time Loved you the first time our eyes had met I felt a tremor in my heart And I heard the strong sound of beating drums Pulsing in the tranquil night Loved you the first time our lips had kissed A zephyr breeze had passed with love The trembling of my hands circled your waist And touched the golden tress of your hair Loved you the first time we lay as one As a tendril twining us Symbiotically into our troth Loved you the first time you called my name my name my name my name myyyy nammme *Sung to the tune of The first time ever I saw your face by Roberta Flack Write a love song Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton July 9,2017

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Date: 8/10/2017 6:41:00 PM
I found this today in your treasure of poems..delightful love poem Ralph!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 8/10/2017 6:54:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay: I'm honored that you searched for my oldies!
Date: 7/19/2017 2:03:00 PM
This is well deserving. Congratulations my wonderful friend for the fine placement.
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Date: 7/15/2017 8:45:00 PM
Really nice lyric Ralph, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 7/11/2017 7:33:00 AM
Fabulous song choice Ralph and your lyrics is very beautiful:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 7/11/2017 2:49:00 PM
Hi Buddy: Thank you very much. she reminds Sarah Vaughn if that's not before your time.
Date: 7/10/2017 8:51:00 AM
Great Song Choice! I like how you tailored your love poem. Thanks for your visit Ralph.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 7/10/2017 11:03:00 AM
Thanks Richard: I'm heading out to Toronto in October to see my daughter.
Date: 7/10/2017 8:41:00 AM
Now all you have to do is get Roberta Flack to sing it:) Nice one Ralph:)
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 7/10/2017 11:04:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel: I was already blown away by her style. i wish she could sing my version.

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