Loved To Death

his love captured me
  as if a rope was thrown
    knotted and tied
      close to my heart

alas with no scissors
  or knife at hand
    i could not cut free

the bonds were too tight
  his love was suffocating
    my heart simply stopped...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/18/2013 6:26:00 AM
Heartfelt words Sharon , for me it is not easier as time goes by. It is with me all the time. Now I try to put a good face on. People say it is time to start a new life without him, and I think ,wait till you lose your love then you will know how it feels to be alone. Hugs Anne
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Sharon Ruebel
Date: 9/18/2013 10:56:00 AM
Hello dearest Ann, you have mail...........XXOO
Date: 9/17/2013 11:59:00 AM
Amazing , well done , pain truly creates the Amazing Artist , 7 +
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Sharon Ruebel
Date: 9/17/2013 12:41:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely words Yvette, please stop in any time. I look forward to reading you. As Always, Shar
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