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Loved the Way

I loved the way you hugged me, And the way you held my hand. I loved the way you looked at me, to where I could barely stand. I loved your deep eyes, The color of blue and gray. I fell to peices, when you looked at me that way. I loved the way you laughed, And the way you made me feel. All I think about though, Is if it was really real... I loved the way you sang, And the way you caught my eye. I loved your entire being, So much that I didn't care if you made me cry. I know that soon, I'll wake up from this dream with you. Always wandering as I look at the moon, Why is there only one here, not two?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/10/2010 10:50:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry at PoetrySoup this year Alicia. May you and yours have a wonderful Holiday Season and may the New Year bring you and yours good health, and may your hearts be overflowing with love and happiness. Love and blessings always, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2010 1:29:00 PM
Another lovely written piece Alicia, nice one >> James :)
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Date: 7/29/2010 10:36:00 AM
Great love loss write with a different approach...Sara
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Date: 7/29/2010 5:54:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Alicia. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2010 5:54:00 PM
A sad little love poem, Alicia. I enjoyed the read. Hope to see more from you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/28/2010 2:24:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight...with luv..
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