Loved One

a smile upon my face
warmth inside my heart
this is what I felt
when we began to start
in a different place
and at another time
a love for ever broken
now no longer mine
you begin to fade away
left presence I can’t see
but I can feel you here
still watching over me
your a whisper I can’t here
and a touch that I can’t feel
I’m talking to you now
I love you and always will
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
February 16, 2024 at 10:37 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 5, 2016 at 2:51 PM
Zoe, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA
Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 6:42 AM
Lovely and sweet poem zoe, love it. - oxox Anne-Lise
Brown Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 8:13 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Zoe. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
La France Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 11:11 PM
weclome to poetrysoup.. this is a sweet poem, full of forever love~
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