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Loved One

a smile upon my face warmth inside my heart this is what I felt when we began to start in a different place and at another time a love for ever broken now no longer mine you begin to fade away left presence I can’t see but I can feel you here still watching over me your a whisper I can’t here and a touch that I can’t feel I’m talking to you now I love you and always will

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Date: 2/16/2024 10:37:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/5/2016 2:51:00 PM
Zoe, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA
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Date: 3/3/2012 6:42:00 AM
Lovely and sweet poem zoe, love it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:13:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Zoe. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2011 11:11:00 PM
weclome to poetrysoup.. this is a sweet poem, full of forever love~
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