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Loved Me Too Hard

He's in love with the wrong woman If he could, her love would be summoned Too head strong and nonchalant, to him love, she can't return Empathetic how his love for herpainfully burns In so many ways she's expressed he isn't for her Darkness would eventually aches She tries her best to to make him hate By pushing him away Sympathetic to his heart that aches He's there picking up the pieces to her pain Knowing love she can't sustain Still he isn't what she would prefer For ones that don't know her worth, for them her heart she reserves All at once his soul drains Only what is shattered remains He's now dark The aches became too severe and sharp No self-esteem established There's no lavish With aggression he yells, "Why won't you love me!" Feeling like he's owed something, he cuts her deep She often mentioned it'll never be mutual He lost control, she became a victim of his traditional ritual Never thought would he Never could it be Earlier she read his card It said he would love me too hard

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/28/2013 8:37:00 PM
Like I said in my poem "Lines in Life" love is a murderer of novice and practiced lovers alike. I read this one a few times. Nice one Kori.
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Kori Wright
Date: 6/6/2015 4:52:00 AM
Thank you very much, I have yet to read some of your work.
Date: 4/3/2013 10:36:00 AM
This is packed full of strong feeling and very well done. Nice flow! Welcome to the soup...Caleb
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Kori Wright
Date: 6/6/2015 4:53:00 AM
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading my work and commenting.

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