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Loved Me Too Hard

He's in love with the wrong woman
If he could, her love would be summoned
Too head strong and nonchalant, to him love, she can't return
Empathetic how his love for herpainfully burns
In so many ways she's expressed he isn't for her
Darkness would eventually aches
She tries her best to to make him hate
By pushing him away
Sympathetic to his heart that aches
He's there picking up the pieces to her pain
Knowing love she can't sustain
Still he isn't what she would prefer
For ones that don't know her worth, for them her heart she reserves
All at once his soul drains
Only what is shattered remains
He's now dark
The aches became too severe and sharp
No self-esteem established
There's no lavish
With aggression he yells, "Why won't you love me!"
Feeling like he's owed something, he cuts her deep
She often mentioned it'll never be mutual
He lost control, she became a victim of his traditional ritual
Never thought would he
Never could it be
Earlier she read his card
It said he would love me too hard

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/28/2013 8:37:00 PM
Like I said in my poem "Lines in Life" love is a murderer of novice and practiced lovers alike. I read this one a few times. Nice one Kori.
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Kori Wright
Date: 6/6/2015 4:52:00 AM
Thank you very much, I have yet to read some of your work.
Date: 4/3/2013 10:36:00 AM
This is packed full of strong feeling and very well done. Nice flow! Welcome to the soup...Caleb
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Kori Wright
Date: 6/6/2015 4:53:00 AM
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading my work and commenting.