Laura Breidenthal Poet Free verse

Love Your Offspring

love your offspring,                                                                                                 
for soon, off they will spring like frogs gainst morning dew

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Timothy Hicks March 15, 2013 at 11:01 PM I love wordplay! But not only is it clever, you've used it convey a really good message... Frogs are slippery, you can't hold onto them forever! I like your style Laura... Keep it up!

... Gigno February 13, 2013 at 5:52 PM !!!

Poet Destroyer A February 11, 2013 at 9:42 PM weee..the offspring.. A good verse Laura, i got the image hopping towards the dew... xox~LINDA

The Situation February 11, 2013 at 1:13 PM 13, signals 16, acceptance 18, gone

Andrea Dietrich February 10, 2013 at 11:27 PM how CUTE. And it's not so bad when they hop away. just so they hop back now and then!!

Justin Bordner February 10, 2013 at 3:11 PM I think this sentiment not only applies to children, but also our creative products as well - J.A.B. %