Love You,Mom

I simply know how my cords will quiver
Eyes fill to the brim with warm gratitude
Voice swell slightly heavy with unshed tears
Its simply futile to say ‘I love you’

You would surely smell the tiniest speck
Detect, hear the slightest little waver
Feel the tightness in the back of my neck
The soft subtle twinge in my demeanor

I worry you would commence your crusade
Negotiate, barter with the maker
Praying and fasting long, I am afraid
to return back the smile of your daughter.

But— write her a sonnet, my heart whispers
And meekly comply my servile fingers.

Written 05/17/2016
Contest "Pen a sonnet on it" judged on 05/30/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 2:58 PM
Beautifully penned sonnet Sara - lovely tribute - I'm lucky I still have my wonderful mother:-) hugs Jan xx
Promise Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 10:47 PM
Beautiful sonnet to your mom Sara, she was able to "detect the slightest weaver" Best wishes, RP.
Chansarkar Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 8:04 AM
Thanks a lot rainbow!
Dietrich Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 3:36 PM
this is a very loving sonnet. The last couplet. wow GREAT ending on it!!
Chansarkar Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 8:00 AM
Thanks for reading it Andrea!
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