Love You 2

I find it hard to find the words for how much I love you, 
For that warm feeling I get in my heart.
For that shiver that waves over me making the hairs on my skin stand up.
That makes the words either not come out or come out as gibberish,
And my knees to become weak threatening to give way just from the sher sight of you.
The smell of yours that lingers behind fills my head with confusion,making me oh how blind to anything else, but the scent of your smell.
So how can I put how much I love you into words and to tell you how hard I have crazily fell, without ending up looking like a crazy fool.
My world is the happiness when I am loved by you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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March 9, 2023 at 5:03 AM
Confused, tongue tied, and giddy, sounds like love to me, Vivian:) I also think smell is a very overlooked sensation when it comes to love.
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May 10, 2023 at 1:39 PM
And wow it's the best feeling indeed??Thanks for your positive feedback Daniel it's very appreciated??
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