Love Without Hope

Above, the blushing blood moon vexes silken ebon space
with shadows in the mournful mist recalling, pale, a wistful trace -
her farewell smile I viewed through tears that almost veiled her face -
she turned her head and whispered low 'another time, another place...'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/12/2017 7:51:00 PM
Good piece Terry
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Date: 1/13/2017 12:09:00 PM
Nicely done Terry! Congrats on your win! :-)
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Date: 1/11/2017 2:59:00 AM
Terry, Congratulations on your win. :) Hugs, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/10/2017 6:54:00 PM
Very nice, congrats on the placement!
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Date: 1/10/2017 6:39:00 PM
Beautiful. Love the last line especially. Congrats on your placement. Agnes
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Date: 5/6/2016 7:50:00 AM
How romantic, Terry, along with the sadness I love. I've missed our back and forth and the experience I've missed of reading your oh so beautiful writing. I just can't get back into the groove. Xxxooo Kathy
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Date: 4/23/2016 4:28:00 PM
Hello Terry ...Beautiful write.... loved it...A7...
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Date: 4/6/2016 11:43:00 PM
Terry, Congrats on your "Love Without Hope" win ... LINDA
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Date: 4/2/2016 1:36:00 AM
Congrats on great win with this lovely write Terry...
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Date: 4/1/2016 3:58:00 PM
Love your Quatrain, which is also a great Monorhyme, Terry. Sad and heartfelt. Congratulations on your placement in Sara's contest. Sandra
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Date: 4/1/2016 3:46:00 PM
Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “Love Without Hope” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Date: 4/1/2016 7:52:00 AM
This is so brilliant Terry! Truly a great work! Congratulations! I hope I'll furthermore see beautiful works like this! :) -HANS
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Date: 3/29/2016 6:10:00 PM
I really like this, it leaves so much of wanting more, a tease in the breeze, nicely done.
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