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Love Without Hope

Years have drifted by as I live by your memories to garner
                   Silently I quivered for your love, but shied to whisper   
                You lived in tumultuous ignorance of my passions dearer
            The heedless winds blissfully enveloped you, leaving me lonelier

         

                                              March 28, 2016
                                     Contest: Love Without Hope
                                        Sponsor : Sara Kendrick

Copyright © Balveen Cheema | Year Posted 2016

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/6/2016 11:34:00 PM Balveen, Congrats on your "Love Without Hope" win ... LINDA Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/7/2016 4:42:00 AM Thanks Linda!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/2/2016 12:37:00 AM Congrats on great win with this lovely write Balveen.. Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/2/2016 3:07:00 AM Thanks Upma!

Jan Allison Date: 4/1/2016 6:03:00 PM beautiful quatrain congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/2/2016 3:08:00 AM So glad you found it beautiful & many thanks, Jan!

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/1/2016 8:35:00 AM Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “Love Without Hope” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara I liked the rhythm and flow of this one.. Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/1/2016 10:05:00 AM Thanks Sara! The pleasure of working with you is entirely mine! Balveen

Sandra Haight Date: 4/1/2016 8:25:00 AM A beautiful Quatrain, Balveen. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/1/2016 10:05:00 AM Thanks Sandra!

Hansteven Selfa Date: 4/1/2016 7:49:00 AM This is so brilliant Balveen! Truly a great work! Congratulations! I hope I'll furthermore see beautiful works like this! :) -HANS Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 4/1/2016 10:06:00 AM That's so kind of you! Thanks Hansteven!

Timothy Hicks Date: 3/28/2016 9:06:00 PM Eloquent, Balveen. "Silently I quivered for your love, but shield to whisper" ... such great language that breezily puts me into your thoughts. Beautiful quatrain and I hope it does well. Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 3/29/2016 4:54:00 AM Thanks Timothy for your appreciation!