Balveen Cheema Poet Quatrain

Love Without Hope

Years have drifted by as I live by your memories to garner
                   Silently I quivered for your love, but shied to whisper   
                You lived in tumultuous ignorance of my passions dearer
            The heedless winds blissfully enveloped you, leaving me lonelier

         

                                              March 28, 2016
                                     Contest: Love Without Hope
                                        Sponsor : Sara Kendrick

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Poet Destroyer A April 6, 2016 at 11:34 PM Balveen, Congrats on your "Love Without Hope" win ... LINDA Balveen Cheema April 7, 2016 at 4:42 AM Thanks Linda!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 2, 2016 at 12:37 AM Congrats on great win with this lovely write Balveen.. Balveen Cheema April 2, 2016 at 3:07 AM Thanks Upma!

Jan Allison April 1, 2016 at 6:03 PM beautiful quatrain congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Balveen Cheema April 2, 2016 at 3:08 AM So glad you found it beautiful & many thanks, Jan!

Sara Kendrick April 1, 2016 at 8:35 AM Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “Love Without Hope” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara I liked the rhythm and flow of this one.. Balveen Cheema April 1, 2016 at 10:05 AM Thanks Sara! The pleasure of working with you is entirely mine! Balveen

Sandra Haight April 1, 2016 at 8:25 AM A beautiful Quatrain, Balveen. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra Balveen Cheema April 1, 2016 at 10:05 AM Thanks Sandra!

Hansteven Selfa April 1, 2016 at 7:49 AM This is so brilliant Balveen! Truly a great work! Congratulations! I hope I'll furthermore see beautiful works like this! :) -HANS Balveen Cheema April 1, 2016 at 10:06 AM That's so kind of you! Thanks Hansteven!

Timothy Hicks March 28, 2016 at 9:06 PM Eloquent, Balveen. "Silently I quivered for your love, but shield to whisper" ... such great language that breezily puts me into your thoughts. Beautiful quatrain and I hope it does well. Balveen Cheema March 29, 2016 at 4:54 AM Thanks Timothy for your appreciation!