Love without Flowers

    How can love blossom without flowers
       full-bodied roses to gaze at for hours
   
    When the vase is empty so is the heart ~
       seeds of doubt sprout tearing lovers apart
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Jones Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 1:19 AM
Congratulations on being on soup'sbest new poems list for this poem!
Wolf Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 8:10 PM
Thank you, Karen. Nice of you to notice. ~ Hearts and Flowers, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 12:41 PM
Sad indeed, dear one. Flowers do fill our hearts and minds with their scented blossoms. An empty vase is an apt metaphor.
Wolf Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 8:10 PM
Empty speaks volumes... Flowers and Fragrance, gw
Cunningham Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 1:17 AM
Wise words Gershon and so true. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Jones Avatar
August 9, 2024 at 6:08 PM
Great couplets!
Swan Avatar
August 9, 2024 at 5:46 PM
Faved this dear little poem. J :)
Swan Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 8:38 PM
I took it in the positive, of course it can be ironic too.
Wolf Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 8:11 PM
Always an honor to receive a fave. Thank you so much, Jeanette!
Onclaud Avatar
August 9, 2024 at 4:25 PM
wise, reflective words highlight your remarkable piece, gershon. love blooms when watered daily...awesome!
Wolf Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 8:13 PM
An 'awesome' from you is highly valued. Thank you so much, Nette! Blooms and blossoms, Gershon
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