Love Will Triumph

In an era long since passed, an Oriental carpet adorning the 
floor from far off lands seems to object to the
leopard skin beneath a fair maiden’s feet, yet this English lass 
seems oblivious as she stares blankly at the floor 
in deep contemplation of her sweetheart and suitor 
standing a respectable distance from her 
with his top hat humbly held in his hand.

His countenance is one of uncertainty, quite ready to
plead his veracity and intention should her father care
to honor his sincerity with an understanding ear.
He feels a bit consumed and cold standing near 
the grandeur of the unlit hearth.

He is attired in his finest to court his fair maiden though 
little notice is taken from her stern yet loving father who only 
wants to see his daughter marry into a dignified and wealthy
family that will elevate his own standing in the community.
The young maiden’s mother is trying to sway her husband’s 
judgment in favor of the young man to appease 
her daughter’s romantic affections.

The young maiden’s mother, dressed in an exquisite expensive
pale pink ensemble makes a stunning statement of breeding 
and manners as she softly coaxes the kinder side of her husband
to appear by placing both hands lovingly upon his breast.
Her father’s clenched fist reveals his determination not to give in.

The lovely maiden spent hours readying herself for this special
occasion, the day in which her young man would come to ask
her father for her hand in marriage. She had been trying to calm
herself by embroidering his initials on a dresser scarf until
her young man arrived, as evidenced by her sewing container opened
partly as she hurriedly placed the scarf back in when he arrived.
Now listening to her father’s words of rejection she holds little hope
of a future with her beloved and contemplates her life without him.
Yet as her mother pleads her case for them to be together she knows
there is very little her mother asks of him he can say no to.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Austin Avatar
January 5, 2014 at 3:41 PM
Second reading - Have you heard the story of Clara and Robert Schumann. As I recall - understand, harr, harr, it was a bit before my time - Clara's dad was unrelenting and nearly ruined an immortal marriage. Same with the Brownings wasn't it? I've forgotten. Love, Dave
Anish Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 11:49 AM
You leave some hope at the end of the poem. Hope this imaginary couple gets together in another poem by you. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Ekechukwu Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 6:11 PM
Skillfully and brilliantly well penned. Love your style and the steady flow. Kudos! Baron Of Ebullion.
Puddifoot Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 3:40 PM
a very well written piece; it tells a story true to the painting and you managed to incorporate all the little details - congrats on your win! :)
Guzzi Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 2:01 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Poshiwa Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 11:57 PM
Congratulations on your win Connie, this is just represents every bit of the painting...xx
Adams Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 6:37 PM
just stopping by to congratulate you on your fine win :)
Zerbst Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 5:12 PM
Congratulations, Connie! This is a beautiful poem! Perhaps the longest poem that is within the scope of the painting. I believe that allowed the intense, powerful, and varied descriptions. It takes me right back to that ornate room because everything is so faithfully associated with the painting. Good Job!
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 4:44 PM
dear sweet connie, look it here. you got third place. A very well deserved win. BIg congratulations to you.
Adams Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 5:48 PM
wow...love how you told the tale of the painting...you penned this one to perfection! Good luck in the contest :)
Richards Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 5:27 PM
Wow, Connie, this is so stunning, and feels as if I am reading a wonderful best seller novel.......I don't want it to end. Wonderful descriptions!!
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 8:25 AM
Hey there sweetie. I am off to school now with my new home stay girl. SUre hope this one does well in the contest. It's a stunner like I said before. Luv, Andrea
Carroll Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 11:38 PM
Hi Connie, A well crafted write...Nicely done. Ken
Mcdaid Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 2:21 AM
you painted with words an excellent piece
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 11:45 PM
connie, you did this EXCELLENTLY. You described with great detail the different little things about each character in the painting and I think everything is spot on. I sure hope it places high in the contest. My sonnet is like a Readers' digest version of yours. haha.
Breidenthal Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 8:51 PM
Wanted to know more! Glad she has some hope! Lovely narrative! Always, Laura
Guzzi Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 6:37 PM
Yup yup... men! LOL thanks so much for stopping by do enter my new contest. I hope all is well with you & yours? Light & Love
Austin Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 9:10 AM
Right in the style and content of Jane Austen or a Middlemarch. I like the scene and the hint of hope. Love, daver
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 5:57 PM
Wow Dave, What a compliment you pay me. I adore Jane Austen and the movies that have been made from her books. Thank you so much! Love, Connie
Mehta Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 5:11 AM
Inch by inch interpretation of the picture, surely a winner
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