Love Will Never Die

Mi love wile nev dead, 
fur di heart fa a man I 
envy, endured to cherry 
under pad-lock tu mi own 
heart. Da days 
ago buy are di tears 
I lef streaming pon mi face 
track, nuh no fi his luv
wile ever seh the same; 
Hoping I have Nuh lost di only 
thang I no, fur the action of  gesture, 
I truly love this man.

my love will never die 
for the heart of a man 
i envy,and cherish
locked away in my own heart.
for the love flow across 
stream left tears on my face, 
as the days go by
not knowing if his 
love says the same 
towards me for I hope 
all is not lost among gesture 
because I truly love this man.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/9/2012 8:41:00 PM
speachless,great write Carma
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 8/10/2012 12:34:00 AM
First time I left you speechless dwl... Thanks richie
Date: 8/7/2012 3:06:00 PM
A good way to express your love for this man of yours...hope he reads and understands this write of yours!!! :)
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 8/10/2012 12:35:00 AM
Thank you very much pace, your words are extremely great full and sencere always
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Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/7/2012 3:07:00 PM
You never seem to phase me with your work Carma!! Congrats on your new love.
Date: 8/7/2012 2:27:00 PM
Lovely written Carma - destiny always opens a new door - Have a nice week. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 8/18/2012 11:19:00 PM
thanks anne-lise fate is the key
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