Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Love Weaves a Mysterious Magic Spell

"Love Weaves A Mysterious Magic Spell"                                                         your's put me through a living hell.                                                                A place I did not like to dwell,                                                                           I always felt like I was in a cell.         

 
Many times I wanted to yell,                                                                         my mouth was closed tight like a clam shell.                                                           If only I could say farewell,                                                                                  break it open like an eggshell.

 
I hear the ringing of a doorbell,                                                                            or is it the ringing from an alarm bell.                                                                    I now need some self-heal,                                                                        once again I want to be very well.                                                                 3

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Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 3:45 PM Belated congrats on your awesome poem. Paula Goldsmith October 1, 2023 at 12:20 PM Thanks for your congratulations/note. Glad you enjoyed my write. Love can weave a magic spell. I took 3 weeks off of the computer. I needed a rest. I am writing again. Have a blessed day/week writing away............

Joseph May August 13, 2023 at 11:29 AM Sometimes its hard to say farewell to love, Congrats on your win Paula Paula Goldsmith August 13, 2023 at 12:30 PM Thanks for your congratulations/note. Glad you like my Rhyme write. Yes, it can be hard to say farewell to love. Love can weave a magic spell. Have a blessed day/week writing away............

Sotto Poet August 13, 2023 at 10:59 AM Back with congratulations on your contest win with this lovely poem. Paula Goldsmith August 13, 2023 at 12:27 PM Thanks for your congratulations/note. Great to see you back and reading my write again. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day/week writing away............

Paula Goldsmith August 13, 2023 at 8:29 AM "3 Place" ~ Love Weaves A Mysterious Magic Spell ~ Date Written: 8/5/2023

Robert Lindley August 5, 2023 at 3:12 PM A very fine rhyming poem my good friend. Yes indeed love does weave a magic spell. Ive been caught in ones grasp several times in my life. God bless. Paula Goldsmith August 6, 2023 at 10:06 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Rhyme write. Yes, many times love will weave a magic spell. I also got caught in it. Have a blessed day/week writing away............

Brandy Nicole August 5, 2023 at 2:26 PM No one belongs in a shell. Your thoughts are deep and powerful, and they curl softly around my heart. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy Paula Goldsmith August 6, 2023 at 10:02 AM Thanks for your note and for your best. Glad you like this Rhyme write. True, no one belongs in a shell. Glad you found it to be powerful/emotional yet tender. It was just a write. Hugs... Have a blessed day/week writing away............

Sotto Poet August 5, 2023 at 2:01 PM Paula, your prose is elegantly crafted, adorned with vivid imagery that dances before the reader's eyes. At times, I find myself pondering whether the infusion of handsomeness and debonair charm would alter the impact it leaves upon the soul. Paula Goldsmith August 6, 2023 at 9:57 AM Thanks for your note and for your kind words. Glad you like my write. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a blessed day/week writing away............

The Situation August 5, 2023 at 12:22 PM Sometimes I wonder if they were handsome and debonair would that change the effect? Paula Goldsmith August 6, 2023 at 9:53 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Rhyme write. Good question. Have a blessed day/week writing away............

Paula Goldsmith August 5, 2023 at 11:32 AM Love Weaves A Mysterious Magic Spell ~ Date Written: 8/5/2023