Maurice Yvonne Poet Triolet

Love Was Our Juice

It felt like a revolution.
Love was our juice, romance our fuse,
our union, an evolution.
It felt like a revolution...
you were the only solution,
i never offered an excuse.
It felt...like a revolution.
Love was our juice. Romance our fuse.






Sponsor: Alfred Vassallo
Contest Name: One NEW Triolet
Maurice Yvonne
09/27/2014

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Brenda Meier-Hans September 29, 2014 at 7:22 PM All I can say is Fantastic! I love it ;-).

Richard Lamoureux September 29, 2014 at 8:35 AM This brought to mind the Beatles. Wonderful piece Maurice.

Dr.Ram Mehta September 28, 2014 at 9:47 AM Very creative write with fine rhyming. Maurice

Gary Bateman September 28, 2014 at 7:32 AM Maurice, I think my friend you've become PoetrySoup's "Love God" with this piece and many of your other similar works. This is a "7" obviously, and I wish you all the best in the contest. A Most Superb write!! Cheers, Gary

Liam Mcdaid September 28, 2014 at 7:07 AM excellent piece of writing pal

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 28, 2014 at 5:30 AM Love the way u did this love triolet Maurice! Best wishes!

Joe Maverick September 28, 2014 at 1:00 AM good write on love here Maurice

Nette Onclaud September 28, 2014 at 12:28 AM now this fired-up piece is madly in love, maurice...i enjoyed the sense of fusion this triolet expresses.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2014 at 10:32 PM By the way, thanks for all the positive feedback I see you giving to others and for the complimentary comments on my poems. I always look forward to seeing what you will think!

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2014 at 10:30 PM WELL DONE. Have you done other triolets before? I sure enjoyed seeing what you came up with for his contest. The old triolets were 8 syllable lines but modern ones I've seen with more lines and I've been doing some with ten syllables per line. I love seeing you try new things, my friend.

Matthew Anish September 27, 2014 at 7:51 PM A sweet kind of "revolution" you describe here. It is of the kind we all need. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Ken Carroll September 27, 2014 at 7:46 PM Good write Maurice!

Barbara Gorelick September 27, 2014 at 6:52 PM A revolution, and a juicy one at that. This is just like you! I enjoyed...BG

Arthur Vaso September 27, 2014 at 5:55 PM I try-a-lot too, but this poem, is Great Maurice!!! Loved it!

Tim Smith September 27, 2014 at 4:16 PM I really like the 6th line..oh yeah the 8th too...the 7th is outstanding....the third superb.....the fourth and fifth left me speechless.... but the rest were redundant....cheers

Jan Allison September 27, 2014 at 4:12 PM Gosh what a change for you to write about romance - if i hadn't seen your name i would never have guessed - seriously great write Maurice good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx