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Love Was Our Juice

It felt like a revolution. Love was our juice, romance our fuse, our union, an evolution. It felt like a revolution... you were the only solution, i never offered an excuse. It felt...like a revolution. Love was our juice. Romance our fuse. Sponsor: Alfred Vassallo Contest Name: One NEW Triolet Maurice Yvonne 09/27/2014

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Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/29/2014 7:22:00 PM

All I can say is Fantastic! I love it ;-).

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/29/2014 8:35:00 AM

This brought to mind the Beatles. Wonderful piece Maurice.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/28/2014 9:47:00 AM

Very creative write with fine rhyming. Maurice

Gary Bateman

Date: 9/28/2014 7:32:00 AM

Maurice, I think my friend you've become PoetrySoup's "Love God" with this piece and many of your other similar works. This is a "7" obviously, and I wish you all the best in the contest. A Most Superb write!! Cheers, Gary

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/28/2014 7:07:00 AM

excellent piece of writing pal

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/28/2014 5:30:00 AM

Love the way u did this love triolet Maurice! Best wishes!

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/28/2014 1:00:00 AM

good write on love here Maurice

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/28/2014 12:28:00 AM

now this fired-up piece is madly in love, maurice...i enjoyed the sense of fusion this triolet expresses.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2014 10:32:00 PM

By the way, thanks for all the positive feedback I see you giving to others and for the complimentary comments on my poems. I always look forward to seeing what you will think!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2014 10:30:00 PM

WELL DONE. Have you done other triolets before? I sure enjoyed seeing what you came up with for his contest. The old triolets were 8 syllable lines but modern ones I've seen with more lines and I've been doing some with ten syllables per line. I love seeing you try new things, my friend.

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/27/2014 7:51:00 PM

A sweet kind of "revolution" you describe here. It is of the kind we all need. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Ken Carroll

Date: 9/27/2014 7:46:00 PM

Good write Maurice!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/27/2014 6:52:00 PM

A revolution, and a juicy one at that. This is just like you! I enjoyed...BG

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/27/2014 5:55:00 PM

I try-a-lot too, but this poem, is Great Maurice!!! Loved it!

Tim Smith

Date: 9/27/2014 4:16:00 PM

I really like the 6th line..oh yeah the 8th too...the 7th is outstanding....the third superb.....the fourth and fifth left me speechless.... but the rest were redundant....cheers

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2014 4:12:00 PM

Gosh what a change for you to write about romance - if i hadn't seen your name i would never have guessed - seriously great write Maurice good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx