Love Wanted To Talk

Last night in my room, love came and
Laid carefully by my side and began to shout,

“I am angry enough to go away and not touch
The heart of anyone anymore.”

She stood up and paced around my bedroom 
And began to cry.  her tears were blood red as
She glided round the room.

“People are now using my name for other purposes
And young people are getting hurt. Some even
swear they will never trust me again.”

she looked at me and smiled then she was gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mahoney Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 9:41 AM
I like this! It's interesting. Good job!
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January 3, 2018 at 2:42 PM
Thank you for visiting Laurie.
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January 3, 2018 at 8:59 AM
How creative, Carlos, terrific write...
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January 3, 2018 at 9:38 AM
Thanks for visiting Charlie.
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