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LOVE VS. DEATH love vs death death vs love who shall win easy. Love the warm beckoning safe harbor that makes you feel bliss and ecstatic and like a teenager again whereas death is a deep dark bottomless pit of cold and evil that everyone dreads and hates death vs love love vs death who shall win? Easy death because in death you shall find all the love you need and want you find belief and hope like there are no troubles in the world or your life whereas if death shall come during love you will be shattered and hopeless. LOVE VS. DEATH DEATH VS. LOVE WHO SHALL WIN it all depends on your point of view so which shall you choose?

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Date: 4/24/2011 2:36:00 AM
It's a draw! Unless of course you Love Death or you Die to Love. Oh well, Nice read here! ~JSLambert
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:26:00 PM
Why must we choose death? The time is not upon me and true love has already found me. So I must live in love and greet the end when no longer am in need of 'tis body. I like your argument though. If you will read my "Shades of Death".
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Date: 4/21/2011 5:09:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jasmine. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 4/20/2011 7:41:00 AM
my first time to encounter you and i am delighted to feel the sentiment of this reflective, creative piece... beautiful! ..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/19/2011 8:53:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your very creative poetry tonight.. hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv. don't forget to check out the contest scene luv..
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:43:00 PM
welcome to poetrysoup, i enjoyed this read, very good.
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Date: 4/19/2011 3:58:00 PM
Jasmine-Neat poem. Contemplative. There are 17 more poems of yours to be read! Happy Spring. Gwendolen
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Date: 4/19/2011 3:20:00 PM
........ooops just popping in to say yes I am indeed colorblind...its no big deal believe me......thanks for reading my stuff......best wishes,,,Syd
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