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Love Unkind

in our hearts we build a temple and then we call it love with sacrifice and sacred thoughts we lift it high above we feed the fantasy of our mind with beauty and a hope to find for the love we placed above our divine we also find can be unkind to those not compared to the swan those not desired but still wish on those whose hearts belong to someone else that possess the love we would have ourself to those not given the gift of time who death separates at the dawn of the find to those that love simply ignores that will never marry or be adored to those forced just to pretend the victims of kingdoms and family fortunes to they to whom marriage was not a gift a momentary pleasure a mere instant of bliss to they who chased the illusion of love whose wealth was the attraction and not true love idols destroyed the temple we built idols stole our sacrifice and defiled our worship we feed the ones we hope to find with our fondest love divine but most of the time love was unkind and show the secrets we try hard not to find

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Date: 7/17/2013 9:32:00 PM
Beautiful but sad in this lovely poem John. love phyl
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Date: 4/11/2013 7:14:00 PM
I wrote something for PD.take a look.take care.
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Date: 4/8/2013 8:07:00 PM
very nice.still stuck on your poem hurt.hope all goes well with moving.talk soon
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Date: 3/7/2013 4:46:00 PM
nicely done poet. Hey if you have time look at a new poet Margherita Russo
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Date: 3/6/2013 11:41:00 PM
I just wanted to let you know it needs a proofread it's wonderful but it's got a lot of typos friend -Maddie ;)
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Date: 3/7/2013 4:58:00 PM
thank you for getting me to make the NESSISARY CORRECTIONS!
Date: 3/6/2013 11:35:00 PM
Very beautiful it's sad but touching I loved it!!!
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Date: 3/6/2013 6:27:00 PM
I think we share the notion that love can be very complicated. Trying to make it work requires giving of oneself and so often we forget in the heat of the moment. You always weave these wonderful thoughts and give some lesson that is helpful. Loved the complexity in this one.
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Date: 3/6/2013 6:22:00 PM
The only bad thing about true love is if its not returned or you loose it everyone pays the price after that that tries to love you or vice versa . Beautiful poem John.
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Date: 3/6/2013 5:47:00 PM
Very creative work..Enjoyed reading this eve..God is a good God and He lets it rain on the good and bad and he lets the sun shine on both also that is true..Sometimes the rain gets withheld from the good because God is trying to get the bad to come around to accepting Him..Thanks for the kind reviews ....Sara
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