Carrie Richards Poet Haiku

Love Under An Old Umbrella

abrupt intrusion....
tiny leak in umbrella
christens a lover's kiss

raindrops tittering 
in sync with coupled laughter...
springtime happy dance




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For PD's contest: Kissing in the Rain
picture #7...#1

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Sara Kendrick June 1, 2013 at 2:35 PM You made the rain sound like a great time..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 30, 2013 at 11:12 AM This sure is a delightful read that brought a smile to my face-- lovely and romantic! I enjoyed this sweet haiku, Carrie :)!

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 29, 2013 at 3:30 PM Congrats on your win. AO

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2013 at 1:15 AM One that should be at the top! congrats,Carrie.

Donna Jones May 28, 2013 at 1:30 PM Happy haikus congratulations..

Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2013 at 2:07 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A May 27, 2013 at 7:18 PM Carrie. Thank you for the lovely pouring sound of your haiku, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA

Connie Gildersleeve May 25, 2013 at 2:16 PM Carrie I love this delightful image in your Haiku. It sounds like a winner. Good luck. Warm Smiles, Connie

Kathryn Collins May 25, 2013 at 11:25 AM Hi Carrie - How romantic. What a pretty poem. love, Kathy

Daver Austin May 25, 2013 at 9:47 AM Especially love the first one - the face of those lovers as drops hit their faces. Love, daver

Monterey Sirak May 25, 2013 at 8:03 AM Wonderful Haiku. A lot of emotion in a few lines.They make me want to grab my husband by the hand and run out into the rain.

Kim Merryman May 24, 2013 at 8:28 PM Carrie, these haiku are fabulous! I love the picture they portray. Love, Kim

Eileen Manassian May 24, 2013 at 7:38 PM Oh this is sweet! :) Love these lines! Beautiful, Carrie! This should do very well indeed!