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Snow fell softly coating the brown ground to white hoar frost hung and decorated the trees sprinkles from the trees fell upon us deep coldness of the day was like the coldness in the heart as we lowered your casket into the frozen ground below we stood and mourned for our loss but the cold sent us for warmth like the warmth of your heart you saw the tears that fell from the heaven above from the one's left behind you felt our love as we touched the wood of your casket on this our final goodbye we will no longer hear your words when we tell you we love you your words --i LOVE YOU MORE a new angel has joined heaven and the Lord has given you wings our lives will be forever grateful for the beautiful mom we had God granted you many years now through our final tears we say goodbye sweet mother our earthly angel now has a heavenly home.

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Date: 1/12/2024 9:44:00 AM
Such a beautiful, touching tribute to your precious mum Phyl. I’m sorry to read of your loss. No time to lose our cherished ones is ever a good time but I would imagine even harder at Christmas. I’m so sorry. She has left you the most precious gift of all - priceless memories of which will comfort you in the days, years ahead. May she rest heavenly wings on clouds of soft silk. Blessings to you.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/12/2024 3:12:00 PM
Thank you for your kind thoughts at this sad time. Yes to pass away on Christmas day will be a sad memory each year but we have all the memories of our sweet mom in our hearts. love phyl
Date: 1/9/2024 4:26:00 PM
Beautiful soulful dedication to the Love your mom instilled unto all around her, for her Love lives on through you , while her soul is at rest and peace, love ya my dear friend
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/11/2024 9:09:00 AM
Thank you my friend for your kind words and yes she lives on by what is instilled in us. It will be hard not to have our daily talks and will miss her terribly. love phyl
Date: 1/7/2024 2:07:00 PM
I am so very sorry for your loss. No words can help the pain. This is a wonderful write for your mother. Yes, a new angel. Be blessed with the love/peace of God....................
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/9/2024 10:53:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughts. She is with us in our hearts. So thankful for the wonderful person she was and for the time we had with her. love phyl
Date: 1/7/2024 12:39:00 PM
- A beautiful poem in grief, dear Phyllis - Loved and missed - A final farewell ... rest in peace in the silk pillows of heaven ... until you meet again <3 - hugs
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/7/2024 12:44:00 PM
Thanks. Yes a final farewell in our grief. Hugs my friend. love phyl
Date: 1/7/2024 12:29:00 PM
I am so sorry for your loss Phyllis.. A beautiful and touching poem.. I would be lost without my mum.. My thoughts and prayers are with you..
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Date: 1/7/2024 12:53:00 PM
I am so sorry to hear that... especially on Christmas day.. I am sure you have lots of beautiful memories to cherish and remember her.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/7/2024 12:35:00 PM
Thank you she passed away Christmas day and funeral was yesterday. I will be lost without her and the heart will take time to heal. love phyl

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