Love U

love u
The word love you ,really touch the soul.
As it came straight through her heart.
Praise i gave her was true from my heart.
So the word came straight though my heart.

To here the word love u,from her heart .
Was great thing to here for my heart.
I felt the real love for me ,when i here 
the word love u,
was like continuous ringing of bell 
in my heart.

It was journey of true love,to talk 
With a girl of true heart,i went 
on to journey of life,
when i talked about love.

The love she bestowed upon with her touch,
was soothing for my soul.
love you ,she said to me was the 
real love to feel for my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/15/2010 9:02:00 AM
Loved your poem Thanks for your generous support during the year 2010 Looking forward to 2011 My Best Wishes to you Suresh Iyer, India
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Date: 12/14/2010 9:10:00 AM
Your verse is as sweet as love.I really enjoyed it ,Saurabh
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Date: 12/14/2010 1:21:00 AM
Thnx saurabh for taking time out to read my work "Satan versus God" & leaving encouraging comments. Lovely thoughts on luv....... Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 12/13/2010 1:45:00 PM
Nice write on the feelings of love and passion, Saurabh
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Date: 12/13/2010 10:21:00 AM
Such wonderful words to hear from a friend, Saurabh. Hope you have many who love you to make your life brighter. Best wishes and blessings, Carolyn
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