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Love Twists, Torments

Love twists and torments the fragile young mind. Nothing seems to help heal it, not even time. That’s why never again, you’ll trust someone. No matter what they say, what’s done is done. The mark has been placed, it shall not part. It’s left a deep scar, upon your heart. For you, love’s gone, and may not be again. I’m sorry it happened to you, yet then . . . What’s the difference, another will show! He’ll behave much better, love true, I know!! I wish things were finer for you… I do. Please . . realize, he’s not for you. If he were, he’d understand your ways. Now when you look, it’s through a maze. It changes the reasons, for your doings. It makes you question, why you’re doing. Know, one-day, over the rainbow, you will find. How true Love counts, in this world so blind.

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Date: 11/9/2019 7:18:00 AM
Deep and dark poem Pax with a lot of good lines. Love is the reason for quitting but it also gives us strength to go on. Keep up the fine work.
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Pax Geist
Date: 11/14/2019 8:59:00 PM
Thank you, always trying. :)
Date: 11/7/2019 7:18:00 PM
love will always leave marks on the heart when it parts...sometimes the marks are too deep to want to trust love again, sometimes just scratched and easily healed...i liked this one it made me ponder thoughts... hugs
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Pax Geist
Date: 11/11/2019 7:25:00 PM
Thank you... :)

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