Love Troll

schoolyard drama scene
unrequited love shamble 

one calico tear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Chircop Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 1:58 PM
I remember those school yard days so well..The first feelings of both happiness and sadness.Sweet Sad nostalgia here..Love it.
Parker Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 9:34 PM
I hope your tears were from joy from those boys!! Thanks.
One Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 12:07 PM
damn... we never forget those tears..
Parker Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 9:12 PM
Such moments are etched for a lifetime. The troll probably not; the trollee, no doubt about it. Marks that moment in so many ways. Thanks for commenting, S1. :o/
Baker Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 4:40 PM
As one grows and experiences the many facets of Love, tears can be expected from time to time. Nice job on your Senryu, Arlo. Write ON! my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Parker Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 11:36 AM
Thanks 4 visit, Texas Bill! Always welcome. :-)
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