Love Troll

schoolyard drama scene unrequited love shamble one calico tear

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/8/2023 1:58:00 PM

I remember those school yard days so well..The first feelings of both happiness and sadness.Sweet Sad nostalgia here..Love it.

Arlo Parker
Date: 10/8/2023 9:34:00 PM

I hope your tears were from joy from those boys!! Thanks.

Silent One

Date: 10/6/2023 12:07:00 PM

damn... we never forget those tears..

Arlo Parker
Date: 10/6/2023 9:12:00 PM

Such moments are etched for a lifetime. The troll probably not; the trollee, no doubt about it. Marks that moment in so many ways. Thanks for commenting, S1. :o/

Bill Baker

Date: 10/5/2023 4:40:00 PM

As one grows and experiences the many facets of Love, tears can be expected from time to time. Nice job on your Senryu, Arlo. Write ON! my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Arlo Parker
Date: 10/6/2023 11:36:00 AM

Thanks 4 visit, Texas Bill! Always welcome. :-)

Tom Woody

Date: 10/5/2023 1:46:00 PM

Happens on the playground, happens in adulthood. Nice one

Arlo Parker
Date: 10/5/2023 1:49:00 PM

So devastating at 13... Thanks 4 the comment, TW. :o)