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Love To Immortalise

Strong storm blew the boat until it did strand Upon rock_ shore so very far away. Please my gentle lover give me your hand There is no way you would let me be prey Row me and the boat ashore to assay This beautiful place we will immortalise No! we did not go down in depths to decay Nor did guardian angel go down likewise Didn't matter what nature will devise Lived through shipwreck we will go down in fame Thru this somehow we will be eternise The whole wide world will remember my name Now this small green isle we'll surely subdue As our great love grows and somehow renew

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/13/2011 5:53:00 AM
I like the way you use the churning sea to describe your passage through life, Sandra. I hope you entered this in Dr. Ram's contest. It seems to have the perfect form as well as a powerful message. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/12/2011 8:34:00 AM
thankxx Sara for your encouraging words today .. hope all is well with u and family.. our prayer chain list is growing daily .. everyone needs some favor ...luv.. God is working hard to deliver...
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Date: 2/12/2011 8:15:00 AM
This is another very beautiful write from you Sara--enjoyed--kashinath
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Date: 2/12/2011 7:56:00 AM
Sara, amazingly found you and your guardian angel, just seconds from hearing from you... You have written a beautiful poem with just enough words to keep it meaningful. till we meet again, Gisele
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Date: 2/12/2011 7:17:00 AM
Another brilliant write Sara my friend.. good luck in the contest .. I am working on my Sonnet today .. good luck for this one is a truly interesting story .. and the element is very evident luv..
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Date: 2/12/2011 7:05:00 AM
Beautiful love poem Sara Love Cookie
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Date: 2/12/2011 5:07:00 AM
This is strickly a mixture of fantasy and imagination..Recently watched Titantic again and some old lost on a desert island type movies....Sara
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