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Love To Be So Cruel

~Love To Be So Cruel~ I never knew Love to be so cruel You were my shining star My crowning jewel Things I learned From love with you They never taught in school You broke every commandment And every unwritten rule From love with you I was used as a fool Of your desire That unquenchable fire Of me you said You’d never tire Oh my My dismay This dismal day I watch as you Walk away I never knew Love to be so cruel Pat LeDuc February 4, 2018

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Date: 2/12/2018 11:28:00 AM
Love is something we cannot buy, yet always pay for. Yet, we continue to look for it.
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Patricia Leduc
Date: 2/12/2018 1:45:00 PM
Still looking but with careful eyes..Thank you :))
Date: 2/8/2018 7:10:00 PM
Love your poem, Patricia. And it visually looks like a trophy for survivial. Moving on... I always enjoy reading your poems.
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Patricia Leduc
Date: 2/9/2018 10:12:00 AM
Thank you ! I am always happy to see your comments :) Lived threw this one~~Pat
Date: 2/8/2018 10:13:00 AM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/member_area/my_poems_searched.aspx?enteredSearch=line Here are all of my poems with line in them.
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Patricia Leduc
Date: 2/9/2018 10:13:00 AM
James...I do not understand what to do??

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